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Walking in Sunshine - Carousel in Roundel Contest

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Walking in Sunshine - Carousel in Roundel Contest

Walking in sunshine, along life's highway, 
Smiling with happiness feeling just fine.
Music fills my soul I am loving this day
Walking in sunshine

A carousel awaits me, horses look fine, 
The music making  me dream a lovers play,
Twisting my hair until  my face meets thine,
Riding together, our bodies sway

Happiness prevails in this heart of mine,
Where is the lover my dreams portray,
Walking in sunshine.

Contest: Carousel in Roundel

Penned by Seren Roberts. On 16 August 2013

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  1. Date: 8/20/2013 9:01:00 PM
    beautiful... congrats in the CAROUSEL IN ROUNDEL contest... SKAT

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/20/2013 9:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you SKAT.....Seren
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 4:44:00 PM
    Oh boy, I love this one. I would have placed it much higher. BG

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/20/2013 6:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you BG....Seren
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 4:27:00 PM
    Great winning work..Enjoyed reading it today..Congrats...Sara

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/20/2013 6:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara ...Seren
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 1:34:00 PM
    I love your approach here Seren.Beautiful poem.Congrats on the win.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/20/2013 6:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thnk you Ash ... Seren
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:32:00 AM
    I enjoyed the walk, congratulations.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/20/2013 6:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Richard thans for calling by ... Seren
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:36:00 AM
    Love your analogy Seren--Congrats

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/20/2013 6:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Craig ... Seren
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 10:56:00 PM
    Many congrats on your win. A wonderful write.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/20/2013 6:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks Tahera, ....Seren
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 7:47:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Morgan

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/20/2013 6:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tnank u Morgan
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 4:42:00 PM
    Seren, Thanks for the wonderful "CAROUSEL" ride.... Congratulations with your winning poem in Nette's contest. always & forever *PD :-)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:07:00 PM
    Way to go, Seren. it was a cute poem that you did. Congrats for your win. BTW, I haven't got time yet to see the thing you soupmailed me about. Maybe I will go do that right now!

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 4:28:00 AM
    I like it Seren will soup mail you Shadow x smiles

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/17/2013 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ok thx
  1. Date: 8/16/2013 11:01:00 PM
    You have written a tremendous write my friend! You have done an excellent Roundel, and have written the content very well! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 7:31:00 AM
    Seren you took me there gl in contest Shadow x smiles

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/17/2013 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you enjoyed your journey ..seren