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Early Scribble

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Early Scribble

Hello empty space
It's time to chase my old phase
Muted by the happiness, sealed behind its shadow
My mind overcome my hand, speechless within row to row

The view of dismantled smoke
The sound of soul's strokes
Caressing my very morning
Tempting every silence which almost abating

Chewing inspiration which almost dried
Try to find my old stride
Jelous to see the rich mind
But crawl from the bottom, I take my own sign

Now say hello to the new lines
The alter bridge of my confines
Today still I write in dimly lit
But this time I choose for not hiding it

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  1. Date: 10/9/2013 10:14:00 AM
    Well worth the waiting it took to write this poem. Gems cannot be polished until they are mined, and that takes time. Well worth the patience... Love ya.... Jake

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 6:36:00 AM
    Yanny, You have written the emotions of writing so well. The stages of wanting to write something but the mind keeps the thoughts at bay until finally you allow them to be written.

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 6:33:00 AM
    This is so good, sometimes when I am at my most contented and happy I also find it the most difficult to write.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 1:57:00 AM
    - I say hello to you ... and thanks for the nice poem Yanny! - Have a nice day and a restful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 9/4/2013 11:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello anne, it's been a while :) happy to see you stopped by, hopefully you have a wonderful day too :) hug, yanny