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cerulean loss

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Below is the poem entitled cerulean loss which was written by poet Samuel Robinson. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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cerulean loss

her alabaster lips did drown
the sea with rage that fateful dawn.
how beautiful with skin so pale,
her alabaster lips. did drown
the roar of waves and shredded sail.
Poseidon's wrath on human pawn.
her alabaster lips did drown.
the sea with rage that fateful dawn...

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  1. Date: 9/15/2013 12:39:00 PM
    very good congrats on being featured lovely poem Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 7:09:00 PM
    Hi Samuel, , CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**

    Robinson Avatar Samuel Robinson
    Date: 9/16/2013 7:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for noticing :D
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 7:56:00 PM
    Superb composition with impeccable rhythm. A belated congratulations :)

    Robinson Avatar Samuel Robinson
    Date: 9/11/2013 2:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks! I like iambic ...ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum...
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:45:00 PM
    Samuel, , congratulations!! awesome "Triolet" ... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 12:36:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..It has great poetic qualities..Soup mail soon..Sara

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 5:13:00 PM
    Hi Samuel, a nice winning poem... congrats....SKAT

    Robinson Avatar Samuel Robinson
    Date: 9/11/2013 2:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks SKAT!
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 1:41:00 PM
    Thank you all for the great comments! and thanks to Giorgio for the challenge!!

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 8:21:00 PM
    very nice...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 6:15:00 PM
    Nicely done, Samuel. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 2:34:00 PM
    congrats Samuel on your awesome win xxx

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 7:09:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 6:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your victory. G.

    Robinson Avatar Samuel Robinson
    Date: 9/11/2013 2:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for taking the time for us!
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 1:35:00 PM
    nice!

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 10:48:00 PM
    Samuel, , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *".

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 3:39:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your poem. Welcome. Rick

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 3:19:00 PM
    Hi Samuel, deep like the sea. Extreme passion against fate..enjoyed, -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

    Robinson Avatar Samuel Robinson
    Date: 9/11/2013 2:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the welcome!
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 11:21:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup, Samuel ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

    Robinson Avatar Samuel Robinson
    Date: 9/11/2013 2:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for my first comment!