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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 2:05:00 PM

    Loving this one again... This time, I'm signing up for the Golden Dream, membership's Cloud CLub... Amazing poem my friend. Love the beautiful splitting image, makes me want to pop my cloud nine. Thank you for the unfolding feeling once again. You know what I love most about your dream "escape pods" How the imagery's breathtaking, it takes me into a poetry world, where I have no choice but to believe in dreams.. You ROCK YASMIN.... LINDA

  1. Date: 12/30/2013 2:29:00 PM

    So happy to see you have a big win fav line [I sit pipe dreamy] did you know that reference was to smoking opium! Come home Yassie I so miss you. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 11:58:00 AM

    Enjoyed your descriptions all through this Yasmin,,, great resultant win´

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 7:06:00 AM

    Congrats Yasmin on your big win! Beautiful lines and words here..Enjoyed this gorgeous write.. !! hugs dear friend

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 7:09:00 PM

    Awesome. Really liked it.

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 9:32:00 AM

    Beautiful Yasmin, a well deserved win.

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 9:24:00 AM

    Congratulations, Yasmin. Fine win!

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 9:00:00 AM

    Enjoyed the poem for the first time and congratulations on this fine win, Yasmin

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 7:57:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Yasmin, This is a wonderfully written poem....Roger

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 6:10:00 AM

    Congrats on your beautiful win, Yasmin! I wish you a Merry Christmas Season and a Happy New Year! :) G.

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 1:38:00 AM

    Yasmin, .. CONGRATULATIONS -thank you for supporting my contest. Wishing you the best when it comes to Health and Happiness, this coming New Year! xox...Linda

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:58:00 AM

    wow... nice Yasmin... a perfect unfolding imagery... congrats...Linda

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:56:00 AM

    Uniquely creative winning work..Great poetic quality..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:44:00 PM

    cloud 9 yasmin Congrats to you on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 8:57:00 AM

    Wow......Yasmin......I would have thought this one would be much is so lovely ....with that first line I was swept away!!

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 8:21:00 AM

    So well expressed! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 12:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on your place on the winners list Yasmin my little friend, and thanks for your continued support love xx

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:34:00 PM

    congratulations.... ~Love ~~SKAT

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:21:00 PM

    You are a "Golden Girl" .. wonderful poem..Iknew I would see your name on the winners's list. BG

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 2:17:00 PM

    Wonderful imagery here Yas.Enjoyed a lot.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 2:41:00 PM

    you pour much grace into this wonderful art-work, mareeey... i am bewitched!... hope you are fine... priya huggs you!..:)

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 2:34:00 PM

    Beautifully written, Yasmin! You have an amazing vocabulary and you use it brilliantly in your poetry. Very well done! Thank you so much for reading my poem "I Am En-Titled To Love", and for the encouraging comments. I appreciate it! I am so glad you enjoy my work. You have a great weekend, as well, Yasmin!

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 2:16:00 PM

    - A poem that delights a reader .... it's just amazing!! - Thank you, Yasmin ... I am very glad that I read it. - Wishing you a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 10:21:00 AM

    wow, lots of beautiful imagery in this one. Love that rainbow burst!! or the cloud, I should say, bursting into rainbow. a very happy poem and a sure winner, I"d say.

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 6:23:00 AM

    sentimentally beautiful in the finest of ways. Yasmin, a poem that will live on Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 6:13:00 AM

    This is a wonderful and ingenious write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this awesome and superior poem this morning! You have delighted me by the splendor of this harmonious cloudy delectable piece! What a perfectly special poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 5:43:00 AM

    Yasmin.....I fell in a trance, carried away with the sweet sounds of this delicate......artfully crafted sensation! "I sit pipe dreaming with head in the clouds" mine faves! jimbo