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Thought of you

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Thought of you

I started drifting away from myself
saw myself changing, 
heard my own heartbeat.
HOW long does it take to reach you ?
My mind kept tossing over the deep blue sky.
I feel intoxicated by your words.
passion is running deep into my blood.
once again I learned to smile.
once again I learned to live.
when you said,little bird fly







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  1. Date: 9/9/2013 3:47:00 AM

    Your words are all aflutter! Beautiful words I must say! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 12:51:00 AM

    You learned to smile...You learned to live. Just beautiful! :o)

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 10:16:00 AM

    Expressive and on point.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 2:08:00 AM

    good morning Red, glad you found yourself. a nice way to spread your wings and fly... luv...linda

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 11:56:00 PM

    A master rapper he must be.

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 10:44:00 PM

    A very nice calm and soothing poem. Nice work

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 7:53:00 AM

    Love it! Love it! Love it! So sweet, dear lady... more please! Warm hugs xoxox

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 10:05:00 PM

    I was intrigued by your avatar...a handsome gal you are...and your poetry...is great...tell me about yourself. If you are so inclined.

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 8:30:00 PM

    aw this is really good! I like this one :)

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 8:15:00 PM

    Well it seems you have rediscovered your voice. This is beautifuly written. Ride the wave of inspiration you never know where it will take you. Good job Red it is good that your passion for writing has returned to you.

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  1. Date: 8/14/2013 6:46:00 PM

    Very beautiful Red...

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 12:27:00 PM

    - Thank you ... this is sweet and beautiful, Red. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 10:00:00 AM

    This is my 1st time reading your work and I'm pretty impressed. I can deeply relate to these lines. Gorgeous & well said. One can only wonder if their thoughts are the same. Great job!