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  1. Date: 4/15/2015 3:36:00 AM
    We can never really put it away... the love remains a part of us.. this is fantastic psychology here..."I have screeching nails scouring down my sleep" Gaaah... I can hear it myself..well expressed, a superb poem yet again! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/3/2015 8:38:00 PM
    Your love for him is an expression, a palpable spirit of his love for You put not his love away because it must survive in your beauty. He fuels your exploration into natural truth. The magical, ingenius way you weave, and release vivid juxtapositions is simply extraordinary! The entire 3rd verse is an education on thought forms encompassing sharp, yet compatible contrasts, WOW! "Thorns on torture..." pain atop suffering, pain is at your command in this masterpiece my Diva...J.A.B.

  1. Date: 1/21/2015 8:18:00 AM
    I swat at my realities turning skeletons---wonderful Bindu, I loved the treatment of the theme>Love> rajat

  1. Date: 9/21/2014 3:27:00 PM
    this is so sad touching deeply bless you wonderful piece of writing you are such a strong woman do take care huggs

  1. Date: 7/6/2014 11:54:00 AM
    The loss of persons close to us cannot ever be forgotten...maybe softened, but it's always there at the back of the mind. Yours is a very strongly expressed write filled with emotion. take care. // paul

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 3:51:00 AM
    Your Poem reveals the grief which hovers on your mind Bindu. If it is based on any real happening it is too sad. Have the courage to face life in its varied colors. With best wishes..Ravindra

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 2:11:00 AM
    very sad,hope god gives u the strength to be strong.

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 12:40:00 AM
    Gnawing, still we have to face it; that is life. Feeling of heart vividly expressed. well written, Bindu

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 8:44:00 AM
    Good morning Bindu, it makes me sad to know the shock the body receives when one does not feel complete. epic imagery.... always~ Linda