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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 9/26/2013 7:56:00 AM
    It is sad when friends separate. You make the reader feel your sorrow and heartbreak. Emotional and sad. nice job

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:12:00 PM
    Great writing, sweetheart. I can identify very well with this one.... My kind of subject matter. You might like Forever - One Day At A Time" Written some time ago.... Jake

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 10:37:00 AM
    Nice.

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Becca, this poem really resonated with me. My best friend of 20 years and I are experiencing this same kind of problem. This is wonderful piece about friendship. Good job and kudos!

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 10:43:00 AM
    The bad times do weed out the true friends from the fickle ones....then sometimes they go away to find their bearings and come back fresh and true, my wish is that this is true. Terrific write and great new form, he should call it PJ rhyme....lol

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 6:55:00 PM
    I can relate entirely to this piece. Good work :)

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 6:13:00 AM
    aww nice .. hmm like it.

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 8:35:00 AM
    WOW! Poetic Justice came up with this form? I love it! :)

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 6:04:00 AM
    Becca, I tend to feel that once we utter our hopes and dreams we give them wings, in the end if it is meant to be just embraced the beautiful memories. Ps: this is a gem :)

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 10:40:00 PM
    Wow, this is a tremendous form, and a great poem from this form! I truly loved reading this awesome write my friend! You have delighted me by the splendor of this amazing piece this evening! Excellent Work!!

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 8:45:00 AM
    Very sad, I hope you reconcile.

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 10:08:00 PM
    Nice rhythmic flow:)

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 6:59:00 PM
    Friendship is often like that. It can be fleeting as the wind........but sometimes come back again. I hope so for you!!:)

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 5:55:00 PM
    Yes, sometimes we don't know what we have till it's gone. Well done trying out a new fom. Take care, Richard

    Seal Avatar Richard D Seal
    Date: 8/15/2013 1:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Some truth in that too
  1. Date: 8/13/2013 4:19:00 PM
    good job. ~Soup Mail~

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 2:35:00 PM
    Beautifully expressed. Here's hoping their ears & eyes are open. The storms are always the determining factor on a whether tomorrow's sunrise will return as strong as it was before.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/14/2013 8:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Only for those worthy of valuing such an iconic dish. :)
  1. Date: 8/13/2013 1:51:00 PM
    How enthralling! Get Poetry Soup to add this form...I like it! Lovely write...lovely thoughts!

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 12:37:00 PM
    A very nice write Becca... Nice to see you again. :o)