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If I Invite you

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If I Invite you

If I invite you to come and join me on a merry-go-round,past this sky's blue, will you join me to find that childhood key, if I invite you? Our unicorn dream to touch rainbow's hue again on dragon's back to be carefree on that wingless horse a journey long due our childhood merry-go-round,come join me! Somewhere must be there, the days once we knew beyond this mundane life come and let us see, if I invite you! By -kash poet contest-Carousel in Roundel Sponsor--Nette Onclaud Date--13th August 2013 =================000================== The ROUNDEL is a deritave of rondeau and rondine... It has eleven lines constructed from two quatrains, and a triplet. The rhyme scheme only has two rhymes and a refrain from the first phrase of first line, thus, the second line rhymes with the refrain:.. a. b. a.B . b. a. b . a. b. a. B.. =================000===================

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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 6:01:00 AM
    This is truly another great gem Kash. Well done once more.

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 7:27:00 AM
    wow, kash.. a tender invite.. .congrats on your win in my contetst, and do comment on my blog.. i wrote about you in general..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:58:00 PM
    Kash, congratulations in the CAROUSEL IN ROUNDEL contest...SKAT

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 4:41:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 2:49:00 PM
    I would love to travel back in time to such journey..What a beauty.You were born a poet.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:24:00 AM
    Fantastic Job! Congrats

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:27:00 AM
    One of my favorites Kash, but not surprised coming from you--Bravo!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 11:50:00 PM
    Kash congrats .....Seren

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 10:55:00 PM
    Many congrats on your win. A wonderful write.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 7:40:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 6:58:00 PM
    So far of my favorites !!! Nicely done, Kash !!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 4:37:00 PM
    Hi Kash, Thanks for the wonderful "CAROUSEL" ride.... Congratulations with your winning poem in Nette's contest. always & forever *PD :-)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:52:00 PM
    Do they have them in India? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:03:00 PM
    so great to see you on this winners' list, Kash. Congratulations to you.

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 10:27:00 PM
    This is a very awesome and wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this phenomenal poem this evening! You have presented a glorious piece here, I believe you knew this theme! You will do very well in the contest! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 3:35:00 PM

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 10:35:00 PM
    by tone, I meant that the theme brings out the same "feeling" of happiness and of sharing a ride with someone!!

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 8:17:00 PM
    Entertaining write, cute one, Kash!!

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 4:01:00 PM
    i love the playful tone of this poem and the repeated invitation. nice job!

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 3:10:00 PM
    this is awesomely done, Kash!!! It was rather a bit like mine in its tone!! I see a high score coming to you!! thanks for making me aware what I did with mine. I was not thinking.