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  1. Date: 8/16/2013 4:50:00 PM
    aww I know who this is about...great simile there at the end of the 2nd stanza, and I love the ending of the poem, so heartfelt :)

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 7:54:00 PM
    There is always a certain charisma in your writing that I endear. I love you. Cindy Lu

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 8:26:00 AM
    Frank, Perfect--you have a way of writing that draws one into their own recollections while sharing yours----one other thing--I thought that Lauren Hutton only loved me! (BTW, I can't believe she's 69 now)

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 7:20:00 AM
    this is magnificent, Frank. I love when you write this way. There are only a few people in our entire lives who can seem to effect us this way, and we can never stop writing about them!! Glad I saw this today! (thanks for bringing me a NEW joke in your comment. haha)

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 7:10:00 PM
    Oh........yes. I can see have painted her face for me as if holding a brush.....and I know someone with teeth as you described, she was beautiful. She eventually had her teeth "altered" when she could afford it.......but somehow I think she was more beautiful before. What a beautiful poem of love this is! (I'm so glad to see you here!!) Hope all is well !!

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 8:21:00 AM
    Simply beautiful, Frank! You are so good at expressing the fascination that never dies!

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 8:00:00 AM
    Hi Frank..How are you?So happy you re back.Your poems entertain my soul..Some people have that ability to know your fondest secret..With one gaze its as if they re saying.'You don t have to say anything i know it all'That wetlook image reminds me of when i was in my teens..Those wetlook tight leggins were so fashionable..Reminds me of Olivia newton john in grease too and ow john travolta : ).