Below is the poem entitled Bittersweet Solitude part 2 which was written by poet
Breidenthal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.
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David William Breidenthal
I feel like my life is a clean slate
I feel you lingering in my thoughts...you stitched up my insecure frame of mind
And stitched up the little pieces of memory that knits a smile on my face
I don't know how to escape my poverty and unstable reality
I should've drove on another lane...now I'm far from home
But you cheer me up with your appealing effulgence
You beam at me as if your the sun illuminating the sky...you amaze me with your brilliance
My fears are ganging up on me
My tears are springing out of my blue-green eyes
Untangle me from my demise and help me reach prosperity
Take me away from my mystifying reality...
Sift out my remorse
Things are getting out of hand...
Out of course... I wish I could fight your wars for you
But you refused my helping hand
We should both go to the promiseland
Please don't refuse this offer
Or I'll feel rejected for eternity
Stay with me forever until I die...we'll share our glory and we'll both take turns and write a fascinating story
Will there be an open door for me to step inside my dreamland?
Will it lead to His promise land?