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AUTUMN'S BREATH

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AUTUMN'S BREATH


A tinge of mauve designed by autumn’s glow upon her leaves, coated in frosty dyes glorious their sways, draped in misty yellow, iridescent like tassels of fireflies. I roam to catch ridged curls in revelry and seek them through air, blowing a wish to wonder at leaves’ palette from ornate tree, their ribs tenderly coiled by fall’s varnish. A landscape gleaming through brushed mosaic where dew trickles on their velveteen sheaths, from backdrop of night’s frame to lamplight’s wick upturned by breath of winds when hours bequeath and know that their radiance will crack in time if I should gather them in my hands to keep. This enchantment is never to be mine, I fling autumn leaves to skies, half asleep. Contest: Autumn's Breath of Gail Doyle

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  1. Date: 9/26/2013 10:06:00 AM

    Wait...I am coming....will soon post.

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 8:42:00 AM

    Congratulations Nette, !!! Fresh & Beautiful... love the Autumn Air.... hugs *LINDA

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 6:02:00 AM

    stunning imagery Nette congrats on win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 8:28:00 AM

    amazing win Nette ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:36:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 1:11:00 PM

    The leaves are a crop but what a crop...Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:16:00 AM

    You are so gifted Nette, congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 6:11:00 PM

    Nette.....this is a beautiful win....congratulations

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 12:20:00 PM

    - Autumn has come, it's a fact! - We get more time to sit inside and share beautiful poem! - Nice to join the contest with you, Nette. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Wishing you a beautiful autumn. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 11:34:00 AM

    Very nice observation made into a beautiful poem. Loved always, my friend,bl

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 2:38:00 PM

    you captured autumn nicely...

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 4:57:00 PM

    you caught me up Nette and carried me into your poem Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 10:40:00 AM

    I don t know which verse is most beautiful..One better than the other..More mesmerizing like a fairytale's dream : )

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 6:22:00 AM

    Nette you have captured in words a visual picture for us to enjoy. Wonderful poetry. xxoo Anne

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 4:01:00 AM

    This is a beautiful description of a beautiful time of year.

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 3:48:00 PM

    Ah fling autumn leaves to skies..we shall soon.....lovely nette....

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 2:45:00 PM

    Every place you take us with your poetry, leads us to an alcove filled with beauty and awe, I light the lamplight's wick for you, so that you may have light, and love just comes along for the ride, big hugs Nette, and thank you for your moral support, xxx

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 12:59:00 PM

    Read it through twice...Amazing imagery....beautiful...wispy...soft....dreamy...

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 12:55:00 PM

    You do know how to enlighten me to the highest peaks my friend! You have captured the essence of autumn and bottled it up for me to sample, and I so do appreciate it Nette! This is such a beautiful poem, I really loved reading this grandiose piece this afternoon! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 11:37:00 AM

    I love this mental picture. Good poem

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 10:22:00 AM

    Oh wow nette, this is beauty personified, truly awesome

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 10:14:00 AM

    - A beautiful poem .... but I'm not quite ready for the autumn yet .... Please let summer be longer .... Autumn is beautiful but summer is a MY time!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)