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Edge of Fire

I feel your breath on moonlit nights
When quiet breezes stroke my hair 
and silence whispers in my ear
My lips are kissed with memories
My skin caressed by silken sheets
My head is longing for your chest 
Upon my pillow rests my cheek
   ~ I want you ~
Your skillful hands to hold me strong
I sense this feeling all day long 
And when I breathe the cool night air 
I swear I smell your faint cologne
Reminds me of the love I’ve known
And then escapes a wistful moan 
Felt from within the depths of me 
  ~ I need you ~ 

My eyes are closed to verity
I feel something come over me 
And memories come strong and clear
I come undone, I want you near 
I need you here to quench the fire 
That’s rising up from my desire  
Your power takes control of me 
  ~ You own me ~ 

© Rebecca L ~ 2013

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  1. Date: 3/24/2014 10:07:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Lovely write, rebecca

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 5:39:00 PM

    Edge Of Fire from a burning pen! Burn Becca Burn! Lady Of Lightning! Luv, 7 chuck

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 3:40:00 PM

    ...and then escapes a wistful moan...

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 8:36:00 AM

    very sensual and passionate. A beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 1:32:00 AM

    This reads very nice . like something I would write , ,,,my Dawn is not a dream of late ;}

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 3:03:00 AM

    I loved your imagery in this one Becca.I felt the passion in your words.Great write.

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 5:36:00 PM

    Being ready is easy. A little too easy.

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 5:41:00 AM

    nicely penned wishes ...thanks for stopping by

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 4:48:00 PM

    Absolutely beautiful Becca, what more is there to say. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 10:52:00 AM

    This is a glorious and wonderful write my friend! I truly loved reading this tremendous poem this afternoon! What a Fantastic piece! Sorry I haven't been around the past couple of days, my grandmother died on Friday, it is so sad, she had emphysema so bad she just lost her breath and passed away by the struggle to just breathe!

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 10:22:00 AM

    breathless in its subtle glow of sensuality, becca... love this side of you.. sultry and yet daintily handled!..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 9:21:00 AM

    Love This!!! And I can so relate to these feelings :-) Amada

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 8:40:00 AM

    Elegant w/a touch of classy sensuality. Diggin' this.

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 6:05:00 AM

    I give you 10 out of 7 my dear sweet Becca! Love and big warm hugs xoxox

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 9:29:00 PM

    Very very very beautiful, Becca. Amazing....

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 7:33:00 PM

    this is sensational Becca love it (7) Shadow x smiles