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  1. Date: 9/12/2014 10:52:00 PM
    This is not only amazing but very beautiful and well written. I would love to read more

  1. Date: 3/20/2014 3:28:00 PM
    Absolutely deep, and loving, so real.... Enjoyed it a lot Charmaine!

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 7:53:00 PM
    Fiction or not...its like u write from my soul, from my fingertips, Making u a favorite now!!

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 4:05:00 PM
    Muito bravioso, pa! But lovely!

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 11:23:00 AM
    EXCELLENT WORK... I love all of it, but these "you dig crazily beneath poured dusk which fills the hourglass beyond your veins" and "Low is the voice which calls the sun to rebirth prisms from droplets'dew Weak are these footprints which mark our path on moonlit snow" are show stoppers. Hope all is well...TAH

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 3:41:00 AM
    Soup Mail

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 5:53:00 PM
    Ps., Hey Pooh Girl, Saw Your Cinderella's Name In Anothers Com Box And Wished To Stop Back By As Hoping That Your Beauty Shall Do Well While Hopefully Enjoying Your Recital In Verse This Coming Week About Her Airwaves * Kudos For The Gig And Sweet Dreams This Wonderful Night ˜ Love Always, John

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 12:34:00 PM
    wow......where to begin....well...Stanza's....Then you dig.....Low is the voice.....Maybe the sun......ALL unbelievably deep and intense, Char.....must print to ponder.......YOU REALLY OUT-DID (a word?!) yourself this time! obviously to mine faves! I got to get back to work (deli closing in 22 mn!) but could ruminate on this for awhile! jimbo

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 3:17:00 AM
    praising your beautiful write again. .. checking to see a new one from you...lovely one. .Goodnight. .linda

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 3:22:00 PM
    You are a breath of fresh air here, Charma, , just like Autumn. I see this was inspired by a winter solstice poem. What a beautiful way to be inspired.

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 1:47:00 PM
    still getting the high, charms.... parking by your lane to say "hi.." ..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 2:31:00 AM
    - Gives me a sad feelings in my heart, touching written Charma! - Well done! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 2:52:00 PM
    Fantastic, moving soul searching verse, there are a few typo mistakes [lungs][how dim it glows now] so glad I read this today! BIG hugs Light & Love

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 8/14/2013 3:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yep lungs is definitely.better than one lung : ) and i changed 'how dim its glow now' to your suggested version..sounds better..tnks deborah and tnks to all friends who commented below : )
  1. Date: 8/14/2013 8:52:00 AM
    Good Morning Charmaine, hopefully last night wasn't the longest. Have a great day.

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 5:47:00 AM
    Whoaaaa! This one takes my breath away! So beautiful my dear Charmaine! Big warm hugs xoxoxox

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 5:28:00 AM
    Wow, stunning piece Charma, absolutely beautiful :) hugs Wilma

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 3:20:00 AM
    I love it Charma! Great job with this poem I love it! Never give up or forget about something or someone you love!! I feel your emotion in this poem and I love your creative energy!!! Also very great word choice! Good job on this write!! From your Best friend and fan, Christopher xoxo :)

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 3:37:00 PM
    wow! Charma, the poem prints many images... love it...LINDA

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 1:27:00 PM
    Awesome vivid lines filled with strong emotion! I loved it. Laura :)

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 11:16:00 AM
    - I love this poem Charma! - BEAUTIFUL - All the best to you! - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)