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BIG STEPS BURDENSOME

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Below is the poem entitled BIG STEPS BURDENSOME which was written by poet BL Giri. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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BIG STEPS BURDENSOME

                                                    step with little legs
                                               all happy days gone away
                                                  big steps burdensome

                                                  sweet softy eyes tear
                                               Parents and family borne
                                                  rare one today hears

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  1. Date: 8/14/2013 2:59:00 PM
    i like the contrast here of baby steps with big ones, BL. thanks for seeing my poems. Have a nice day!!

    Giri Avatar BL Giri
    Date: 8/16/2013 3:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks for your comment, my friend. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/13/2013 2:41:00 PM
    enjoyed these bl

    Giri Avatar BL Giri
    Date: 8/14/2013 11:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks my sweet friend. Always, bl
  1. Date: 8/12/2013 4:03:00 PM
    Hi BL this describes progress to a T well penned Shadow x smiles

    Giri Avatar BL Giri
    Date: 8/14/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi! my friend, thanks a lot for visiting my page and for giving comment on my write. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 3:33:00 PM
    Hi Bi; I always take baby steps, before I take a big one. Enjoyed your poem very much. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

    Giri Avatar BL Giri
    Date: 8/12/2013 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot for your visit to my page and for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 1:15:00 PM
    BL., little steps, is all it takes... enjoyed....LINDA

    Giri Avatar BL Giri
    Date: 8/12/2013 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks for your beautiful comment, my friend. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 11:44:00 AM
    - Lovely bl. - - Have a enjoyable Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Giri Avatar BL Giri
    Date: 8/12/2013 9:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl