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PICTURE PERFECT

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PICTURE PERFECT



FATE DOES NOT FORGET She cherished him long after nights had crept Tracing his shape on byways, on footfalls Like dangle of lint she could not forget; Breezes waved a quick adieu, winter drawled Amidst the rancid trees bared, and yet Her faraway lover tracked her stroll. Entranced, they climbed into each other’s eyes Prompting the moon to act as fate’s ally. Contest: Picture Perfect, Andrea Dietrich

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  1. Date: 8/25/2013 3:18:00 AM
    'They climbed into each other's eyes'...My God Nette, how did you come up with THAT? Stunning...

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:24:00 PM
    Nette....loved the climbing into each others eyes...lovely poem....congratulations

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 9:06:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS NETTE.... Picture awesome Perfect. LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 8:04:00 PM
    amazing it is Nette... congrats...PD

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 3:12:00 PM
    Nette, this is a gorgeous poem. I was not sure about a few of your end rhymes, but for grammar, punctuation, and imagery, you were spot on!! Congrats for your win!

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 12:15:00 PM
    This will not soon be forgotten. Congratulations Nette.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 6:24:00 PM
    Hi Nette, a perfect picture you've written here, I imagine them waist deep in snow for some reason lol, good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 10:37:00 AM
    Hi dear Nette..How happy i am..I might call online on sunday on drake s show..I definitely would hear you : ) Now re this beauty..It touches me deep to core..for many reasons

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 8:39:00 AM
    Your poems cannot be anything but perfect........in every way, every time I read one.....I find perfection and beauty!

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 10:16:00 AM
    How a loving poem can be penned, I try to learn from you. You have shown an excellent way to depict the matter of two hearts. Genius........, loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 8:43:00 AM
    Indeed, Fate does not forget. Fate is Karma's best friend, after all...this was a very gripping piece.

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 8:35:00 AM
    "Entranced, they climbed into each other’s eyes" Very beautiful line. Nice poem.

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 7:51:00 AM
    Beautiful work. best wishes from your new friend Nadia. Good luck.

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 11:07:00 PM
    What a dreamy poem nette. I enjoyed this tonight...I was thinking Fate or Faith are both acceptable title. Oh, BTW..I am a Virgo, born in the year of the dragon. I am married to a Scorpion..what do you think? Dragon vs a Scorpion, who is at the losing end? LOL Love, Dalila

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 10:19:00 PM
    I got a great visual of this wonderful write my friend! I imagined these two so very in love under the full moon entranced with each other, just as you have written, I can imagine it! Sorry I haven't been around the past couple of days, my grandmother died on Friday, it is so sad, she had emphysema so bad she just lost her breath and passed away by the struggle to just breath! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this evening! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 5:37:00 PM
    Good morning my dear friend Nette! Big hugs! How are you? I hope everything is going well with you and the rest there. I was quite agitated since last night when I heard from my friends that there's a typhoon there. I hope it's not destructive. Stay safe ok? Here in BKK, it's cloudy. About your poem, it's so lovely, sweet & romantic. I love it and embracing it this morning. You write outstanding poems as always! Thank you so much for sharing & everything. Take care! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 3:49:00 PM
    So beautifully written, from the pen of a great poet....Peter

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 3:39:00 PM
    Very tenderly sweet. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 1:18:00 PM
    Romantic work penned..Enjoyed reading this one today...Thanks for the visits to my work...Sara

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 1:10:00 PM
    Beautiful as usual!!Love it Nette!

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