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Tungsten Glow

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© 02-24-2013, G. V., All Rights Reserved
© 08-11-2013, G. V., All Rights Reserved
(Iambic Pentameter - Surreal - Elegy)


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Tungsten Glow

Tungsten Glow

Ideal's the emptiness amid stone scapes;
Invited souls - two dancers times enfold;
Invoke the past, rose thorns redraw its shapes
the years sustain recalls of feelings' mold.

Recite old scripts - the weather's voice is cold,
an audience of ghosts their steps extol
the shrines remember them on timeless role,
Adventive cadence is their final goal.

Consorted on the broken glass, they bleed
their lives ascended amid rains of red
maintained and held their words, old ends impede
somehow the birds forgot to sing and fled.

The runnel wraiths of emptiness out-traced
existences' odd trails and righteous shed
where acquaintances devoid embraced
- their solitude; and in the woods winds fled.

Rose-feverish their tips caress time's strings;
and dithered silence shines her splendid glow,
lone glances coil on tungsten glowing rings,
and abstinent redraw - their tears redraw.

© 02-24-2013, G. Venetopoulos, All rights reserved
(Surreal - Elegy)

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  1. Date: 3/21/2014 5:32:00 AM
    Brilliant write. Congratulations on the fine win, Giorgio

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 6:07:00 AM
    Thank you all, friends!

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 9:12:00 AM
    the powerful words, the beautiful inscribed images...the flow of your words, all come together in to perfection...congrats on your super win :)

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 10:26:00 PM
    Hello Giorgio, lovely impressive win................ SKAT

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 4:35:00 PM
    Intelligent and emotional. Wow! Congrats, Giorgio!

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 5:17:00 AM
    congrats on ur win,

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 9:50:00 PM
    BAM! That is how a fine classical quatrain is written. Double BAM! Giorgio, my friend, thank you for gracing the world and me with your poetry. I will be marking this as another favorite. ~CTB

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 8:13:00 PM
    Excellent poem Giorgio, congrats on your win xxx

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 3:27:00 PM
    Powerful write here sir...Congratulations on a well deserved win - Tim

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 1:52:00 PM
    Hello PINKTOBER, winning poet --- Giorgio --- Thank you for embracing my contest with your poem. I took my time on this particular contest, many heartfelt poems:-(... If you'd like:) stop by my latest blog "Hold My Pen While I Write." In there you will find my very own PinkTober invitation. Take Care & have yourself an awesome day... xox~

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 7:15:00 AM
    This poem is so profound and the last stanza even deeper..Beautiful with a brush of melanchonic thristiness..I love these words'their tips caress time' s strings'..So beautiful

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 11:57:00 AM
    - A deep and beautifully written poem, Giorgio - Have a enjoyable Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 9:02:00 AM
    giorgio, a wonderful splatter of dance, flames and roses... you mix colors in a pallette with such abstract glow.. this is unusually impressive.. thanks for coming around with your kind words..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 4:28:00 AM
    Very expressive work that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara