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Hyperventilating

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Hyperventilating

Hy - c-calm down, calm....down....
Per - stay content...don't be scared...
Ven - don't fret - God is near
Ti - calm down...shhh...j-just
La - think...p-positive...
Ting - and pray to God for help! ! 
Lack of s-s-sleep...and I wonder why...
"How was your sleep, hon?" - mom
"Hey! How was it, sweet son of mine?" - mom
Should I...I...tell you?... 

fine...


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  1. Date: 8/11/2013 8:10:00 AM
    You have a lot on your mind. What is remarkable is that you are creative and funny. You bring a smile to my face. If you can laugh at yourself on some level, then you will be ahead of most of us.