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Just Forget Me

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Just Forget Me

Just forget me,
and walk away,
It wasn't meant to be,
So why try to stay.

Don't look at me,
When you walk by,
You don't want to see,
If I start to cry.

If you like her,
Then leave me alone,
Yet, here you were,
Talking on my phone.

What is it you miss,
Do you remember when,
I can't take this,
Never see me again.

When you do go,
Just take my heart,
Do I need it, no,
You tore it apart.

You go your way,
And I'll go mine,
Don't worry today,
Because I'll be fine.





Written by: Kelly Deschler

For Giorgio V.'s contest - Relate Your Poem To One Of These Quotes

The quote I chose was - 
6) "Some cause happiness wherever they go; others, whenever they go." 
- Oscar Wilde

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  1. Date: 6/22/2014 8:34:00 PM

    Oh my gosh Kelly.. I love this!!!

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 6/23/2014 11:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much for reading and commenting on this poem, Dave. I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
  1. Date: 1/11/2014 8:01:00 PM

    Hi Kelly, well once more your pen runs gold. You always manage to say what you want to say in a very gentle way Kelly. You use such simple words to describe your vision. I Love that in itself. Congrat's on your win by the way. Too many people try to use metaphors all the time and a poetic piece can actually get lost, and they also want to use all these big words, your running for a dictionary every ten seconds. Your poetry isn't like that, it is easy on the eye and easy to read....MIKE.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 1/15/2014 3:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much, Mike! I completely agree with what you said here. I am not a big fan of poems that are over complicated. I don't like to read poems over and over again, just to understand them. I think the subject does get lost in the metaphors, sometimes. I like your poetry as well, because it is more simplistic and easy to read and enjoy!
  1. Date: 12/24/2013 7:30:00 AM

    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Merry, Merry Christmas To You And Your Family!!! Sara

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 12/27/2013 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much, Sara! I hope that you and your family had a great Christmas, and I wish you all the best for the New Year!
  1. Date: 12/20/2013 4:11:00 AM

    Enjoyed the write on the selected quote and congrats on the fine win, Kelly

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 12/21/2013 8:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much, Dr. Ram!
  1. Date: 12/19/2013 8:53:00 PM

    Kelly, , Congratulations on your awesome win... always~ LINDA

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 12/21/2013 6:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much, Linda!
  1. Date: 12/19/2013 6:33:00 PM

    Very nice....congratulations

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 12/21/2013 7:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much, Donna!
  1. Date: 12/19/2013 12:02:00 PM

    - Congratulations on your winning poem Kelly in: Relate your poem to one of these quotes, Contest - Sponsored by: Giorgio V. - Nice to participate - and enjoyable to read ALL winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 12/21/2013 7:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much, Anne-Lise. I am glad that you enjoyed it!
  1. Date: 12/19/2013 10:17:00 AM

    Congrats Kelly!

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 10:01:00 AM

    Kelly: Congrats on your beautiful poem and on your great win in my contest "Quotes". Thank you for your participation. :) G.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 12/21/2013 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much for the honor, Giorgio. And, you are very welcome, I always enjoy entering your contests. :)
  1. Date: 11/25/2013 8:07:00 PM

    Kelly These words tug at the heartstrings and make the reader feel your pain and sorrow. You spoke from your heart and soul and it shows. Nice job

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 10:16:00 AM

    You are very good at creative word plays and original ideas. Verse five is positively brilliant! Also an excellent job piecing a plot conforming to such an intricate rhyme scheme, and short lines to boot. This fits the generic form of rhyme but I think it is better placed under the form of "quatrain," which is when there are four lines, the second rhyming with the fourth, or optionally and additionally the first with the third.

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 8:54:00 PM

    sad. . . love found should not be taken for granted, that was not love but deception of the heart, a gal like you is hard to find, if only you would be mine. . . see you got me inspired. .. . . lols