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The Real Me

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The Real Me

I want to show you the real me,
Not just what you think you see,
I like to dress in black, not pink,
My dark poems will make you think,
I can't always be happy like you,
For I am sad, and often blue,
My soul was dying to break free,
To be the person I wanted to be,
I have hid my true self for many years,
While deep inside, crying many tears,
But, now I am showing the real me,
And you are just starting to see,
I'm emerging in the dark poetry I write,
The difference is like day and night.

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  1. Date: 4/1/2014 2:28:00 AM

    and the difference makes day and night. I can really relate while (reading)adapting this poem I found something of my own her too. Dutch Greetings Elly

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 4/1/2014 5:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much, Elly! I'm glad that you could identify with this poem. It is nice to know that there are others out there, who have had the same experiences that I did. :)
  1. Date: 1/31/2014 7:46:00 AM

    wonderful and impressive write and congrats on the win, Kelly

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 1/31/2014 9:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the great comments, Dr. Ram! I appreciate it very much.
  1. Date: 1/29/2014 6:46:00 AM

    Your really did great on this one Kelly, Congrats on your win.....Hugs....Roger

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 1/31/2014 6:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much, Roger! I really appreciate your kind comments. Hugs. :)
  1. Date: 1/28/2014 1:14:00 PM

    KELLY , <3<3*CONGRATULATIONS, I THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST. Take care ~SKAT~

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 1/29/2014 6:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much for my placement, SKAT. And, it's no problem! I always enjoy entering your contests, whether I place or not. :)
  1. Date: 1/8/2014 5:56:00 PM

    Hi Kelly, once more an excellent write by you. Not many people are ready to ever reveal there true selves. Indeed it hurts to hide your inner self, to try and be something your not for other people. Let yourself be free, be what you are, liberate yourself by being yourself. That really sounds wierd doesn't it? I think you know what I mean. You never change who you are for anyone. It always hurts the more when yu try to be something you aren't. Have a good day. Later. Your Friend....MIKE.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 1/9/2014 4:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I do understand, and I agree with you, Mike. Sometimes, we have to get away from ourselves, every now and then! It would be a miserable existence if we lived our lives how others wanted us to. But, we have to go our own way, and be who we want to be. No matter what other people might think. Thank you once again, Mike!
  1. Date: 12/3/2013 5:40:00 PM

    Kelly What a wonderful and honest write about showing the inner you that a lot of people try and hide. You let it out and let us see. HHHMM should we be scared. LOL Thanks for the great and insightful comment on my False Friendship poem.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 2:51:00 PM

    soup mail....

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 4:29:00 AM

    Jake sums it up quite nicely. Nicely portrayed Kelly.

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 10:52:00 PM

    It can take a lot to reveal the real you sometimes whether to the world or to your partner. Great write Kelly

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 2:44:00 PM

    The willingness to reveal ourselves is something we must yield to if we ever hope to communicate our true makeup.... and we must let people see what makes us want to create if we ever hope to succeed. You have done this very well... Love ya dearly.... Jake

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 5:01:00 AM

    VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMING OUT OF YOUR SHELL I HAVE ONE JUST RIGHT UP YOUR STREET MOTHER PEARL

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 5:09:00 PM

    I like your introduction poem, Kelly .. I will be looking forward to getting to know you better through your poetry :)

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 10:15:00 AM

    Oooh, this one is really dark. Do you write based on your feelings, or sometimes imagine a situation and write about it? I am usually in the imagination mode.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 9/5/2013 2:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I think a little bit of both. I didn't have the perfect life when I was growing up, so, I think some of my darker stuff comes from there...which is hidden deep inside somewhere, but, occasionally it comes out.
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 6:16:00 AM

    yea I can relate great poem

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 4:28:00 PM

    About me is what i see as the title and many who read will find some common traits with thee i see you are similar to me and now you also on my most wanted list to read your dark poetry stuff!

  1. Date: 8/10/2013 3:06:00 PM

    - Really well written, Kelly.- Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 4:50:00 PM

    Great work..It has good flow and rhythm to it..I am glad that I chose it to read today..I hope not indicating that you are depressed but just about the topic..Thanks for stopping by..Sara