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A Jasmine's Breath

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A Jasmine's Breath

Flesh on jasmine bed
Taste her pleasured ascension
Carnal roots, piqued

©Drake J. Eszes

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  1. Date: 12/9/2013 12:48:00 PM
    Oh the soft scent of Jasmine that touches ones senses as passion fills the air ! Beautiful write my friend!

    Hoose Avatar Mary Jo Hoose
    Date: 12/9/2013 3:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My pleasure my friend! :)
    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/9/2013 12:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi & thank you so much, Mary Jo! Great that you stopped by!
  1. Date: 12/3/2013 6:11:00 PM
    Pleasures of the flesh and senses.......mmmm Jasmine. SuZ

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/3/2013 6:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Got that right. :) Thanks, Suz!
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 10:20:00 AM
    SWEET SMELLING BEAUTIFUL

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 9/13/2013 11:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi & thank you, Liam! =D
  1. Date: 9/2/2013 4:36:00 PM
    Quite a visual composition, Drake. Delicious, memorable lines...another awesome Senryu! Always, Laura

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 9/2/2013 4:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I did aim for "delicious", yes. Thank you so very much, Laura! =D
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 9:23:00 AM
    rerereading this beauty..: )

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/21/2013 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Cool! Be my guest! =D
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 2:08:00 PM
    Hey, Drake...reread...Jasmine!!!! Hmmmmmm...soupmail! :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/20/2013 2:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha ok. :)
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 1:27:00 PM
    Wow so much said in so few words I love the last lines of your wonderful Haiku! Thanks for your ongoing support it has meant alot to me! Laura :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/20/2013 2:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm glad you enjoyed it! You're very welcome, Laura! =)
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:12:00 PM
    Hi, A well written poem, very erotic, wonderful. Kind wishes, Linda x

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/19/2013 2:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi & thank you very much Linda! =)
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 2:06:00 PM
    Love it! I love the... shall we say "dirty" implication. Very nice! :) :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/15/2013 2:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "Dirty"? Yeah...."dirty". =D Thanks so much, April!
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 8:24:00 AM
    Ohhh, a very nice one, very erotic. I love this form for its compaction - a lot in a very few words, which you have achieved, my friend... Jack

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/15/2013 8:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I certainly tried and it seems it worked out well. :) Thanks so very much, Jack!
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 8:00:00 AM
    Hi Drake-- Sensual Senryu. Could almost smell the jasmine and feel the passion-- talented as always. Xx

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/15/2013 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey there, Kim!!! =D Yes, I almost did too as I wrote this. So happy to see you here again!
  1. Date: 8/14/2013 7:14:00 AM
    Is there a way for me to hear your broadcast in Canada? Can I listen to past broadcasts?

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/15/2013 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Drake I will check it out.
    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/14/2013 7:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Everything is on the web. Anybody across the world can listen in. :) www.blogtalkradio.com/standas1 All the archived shows are there.
  1. Date: 8/13/2013 2:50:00 PM
    Sorry I didn't even notice the date of the show with Nette is for the coming sunday. Do you get lots of Soup listeners on it? How many soup poets do you have read on your show every time? It's a great thing you are doing for the poets here~!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/13/2013 2:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No worries! =D It's hard to tell who from PS was listening unless they tell me on my blog or they were in the chat room during the live show. I'd love to have more...many more. I'm doing what I can to provide a voice for poets here & elsewhere.
  1. Date: 8/13/2013 11:46:00 AM
    and the next?. hello, drake!.:)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/13/2013 11:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi. ;-) Soon...
  1. Date: 8/13/2013 10:41:00 AM
    Excellent true to form and count, I could smell the beautiful scent, great write, blessings sueellen ,

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/13/2013 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That is greatly appreciated. Thank you so much, Sue-Ellen!!!
  1. Date: 8/12/2013 10:15:00 PM
    Sounds like a done deal.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/13/2013 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes! :) I'd say so! Thanks so much, John!
  1. Date: 8/12/2013 8:52:00 PM
    Hello Drake, at one time I admired the scent, .. haven't crossed it for years... Until now, thank you for triggering the memory of how beautiful the air rises to when the flower is around. enjoyed your senryu... love.....LINDA

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/12/2013 9:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're quite welcome. I'm glad to have triggered good memories. Thank you much for stopping by here, Linda.
  1. Date: 8/12/2013 3:40:00 PM
    TASTEfully done.....:-) :-) :-)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/12/2013 4:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I see what you did there. =) Thanks, Donna.
  1. Date: 8/12/2013 2:47:00 PM
    If she's a jasmine's breath than you must be a spiced red carnation, thank you for your visit my page, I rejoice in seeing you there, xxx

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/12/2013 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Perhaps...perhaps! =) Thanks so much, Rose!
  1. Date: 8/12/2013 12:31:00 PM
    Wow!!! This is hot Drake...love it:)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/12/2013 1:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi & thank you so much, Cherie! Good to see you again!
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