Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places

Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

She waits : Triolet contest

Seren Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled She waits : Triolet contest which was written by poet Seren Roberts. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Seren Roberts

Best Seren Roberts Poems

+ Fav Poet

She waits : Triolet contest



Black and sleek she waits,
to pounce on unsuspecting foe
Whiskers a tingle she anticipates,
Black and sleek, she waits
come little mouse she states
I wont eat or hurt you,  you know,
Black and sleek she, waits
to pounce, on unsuspecting,  foe


Penned 9 August 2013

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:48:00 PM
    Seren, , congratulations!! awesome "Triolet" ... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 12:17:00 PM
    Very descriptive of that waiting cat...Congrats on your great winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 4:16:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. Morgan

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/26/2013 8:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Morgan ...Seren
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 5:38:00 PM
    Seren, congratulations.... SKAT

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/26/2013 8:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi SKAT.... thanks for the comment ...Seren
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 11:52:00 AM
    Congratulations Seren on your win with this wonderful write. I wish mine would do some pounching, I think they just play with the furry things. I enjoyed the read~Caryl

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/26/2013 8:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL I dont own a cat just an old boxer bitch .....Seren
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 6:43:00 PM
    And they seem so sweet. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/26/2013 8:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Joyce ...Seren
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 1:54:00 PM
    Oh.......naughty cat !!! Sounds like Sylvester to me !! :) Congratulations Seren.......such a cute poem!! (ps...hoping to hear you read next time on Drake's show !) :)

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 12:39:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win Seren

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 7:14:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 6:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on your victory. :) G.

  1. Date: 8/10/2013 5:27:00 PM
    Looking at yours again. I like it better than mine. I am thinking of doing a different triolet now!! haha

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 5:39:00 PM
    She sounds like my Razmatazz, Seren, only my sweetie cat does not care about mice. Very enjoyable triolet.

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 5:41:00 AM
    I tought I taw a puddy tat! I did, I did, I did see a puddy tat! And this cat was ready to pounce of that poor defenseless mouse! But in my mind, all the power to the cat, get that mouse! Where we live these outside cats love the field mice that we have, they leave little gifts of them on our doorstep every now and then! This is a spectacular write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a glorious piece, just like a cat too, clever! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 1:44:00 AM
    Very nice, Seren... good luck in the contest... Terry

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/9/2013 1:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thx Terry.......Seren