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Smoldering

Eileen Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Smoldering

She feels the need rising up from her core
Ever waiting to burst into fire
Insatiable, always in need for more

Smoldering ember of her desire 
Orange heat pulsating from deep within
Ever waiting to burst into fire

No breeze can cool this, her hot searing skin
Savage her need to combust into flame
Orange heat pulsating from deep within 

Her galloping passion wild and not tame
She rides fiery flares all through the night
Savage her need to combust into flame

The hunger in her eyes makes him ignite
She pulls him into her internal blaze
She rides fiery flares all through the night

His body kindling that lights in her gaze
She feels the need rising up from her core
She pulls him into the internal blaze
Insatiable, always in need of more

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 8/9/2013 5:54:00 PM
    This poem gave me images of a wild wild horse. This is a really heartrending, passionate poem. I very much enjoyed reading it. Always, Laura

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/11/2013 5:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Laura....so good to read this lovely post today...Hugs! :)
  1. Date: 8/9/2013 5:59:00 AM
    I enjoyed all the comments. Hope you are having a great day.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/9/2013 7:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Your greetings always pave the way for that to happen! :) My daughter is here! I'm OVERJOYED! She is the light of my eyes...the soul of my soul! My beloved princess!
  1. Date: 8/9/2013 2:30:00 AM
    :) Im reading the comments below and smiling sweet Eileen..Don t blame it on drake but on the muse who ignited all these sparks.You re getting me in the mood of sultry and spice but id better go and spice my chicken B-)..and do the roast. A hot sensual sultry excellent poem..yet still classy..just the way you do it B-) Give us another one B-)

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/9/2013 3:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Great answer, sweetie! Hugs to you! :)
    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 8/9/2013 3:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :)Its safer to spice the chicken..Unless i forget it and burn it in the oven.Have a lovely day dear :)
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/9/2013 2:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) How sweet of you! Yes, sometimes adding spice to the chicken is MUCH safer, no? ;) Well, we will see when this HEAT wave passes. Hopefully there won't be too many burnt bodies left in the wake! LOVE ALWAYS....EILEEN
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 7:12:00 PM
    Oh my! ;) Very sensual and tantalizing piece. And so well written and expressed. Love it.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/8/2013 11:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    April....you are too kind. This is my first EVER Terzanelle. I MUST admit...it wasn't the hardest for me after the Terza Rima. I do lie to spread my wings and try new forms. Thanks for stopping by! :)
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 5:30:00 PM
    How's that meg ryan movie line go? I'll have what she's having!!!!! :-)

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/8/2013 11:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!! Writing and HAVING are two different things, my dear...But since having penned this...Oh dear....this IS a public domain! HUGS, MD! Love ya!
    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/8/2013 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awesome kiddo....oops sorry...there I go again....MD
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 5:09:00 PM
    What's with the 'I Wish' avatar? haha

    Seal Avatar Richard D Seal
    Date: 8/9/2013 1:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes you do, thank you
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/8/2013 11:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I WISH...or I AM! Hmmmmmmm...seems to me, Mr Seal, thou hast gotten thy verbs confounded! Hmmmm...allow me, a teacher of the English language, to set thee straight! I AM avatar! ;) Man...would you just let me dream in peace, Mr Seal...There you go dousing the flame! GRRRRRR!!!!!!! The appropriate thing would be: Hey, put an avatar of you...You are more sizzling!!! ;) I forgive you. Don't I always!
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 5:08:00 PM
    Smoldering, one of my all time fave words and you did it mighty justice in this write my little Desert Orchid, my screen was almost melting away lol. Tke care, Richard

    Seal Avatar Richard D Seal
    Date: 8/9/2013 1:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes tease and smolder lol
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/8/2013 11:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WOW! Really....an all time fave? Are you sure it isn't tease? I'm so glad I brought the word to life for you, Mr Seal....but, I will not pay for damages to your screen...That's where I draw the line! ;)
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 3:32:00 PM
    Smoldering for sure, girlfriend. Well done on your first Terzanelle attempt. Queen of the Hotties. Great stuff, Eileen. Huggies, Licia :-)

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/8/2013 11:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    QUEEN OF HOTTIES! HA HA HA HA HA! I LIKE! I LIKE! Oh Licia....what will Poetry Soup do with me! I want to write about the birds and the bees...Ooops...did I say birds and bees...HA HA! Good grief, woman...I have a one track mind! No no....I'm posting one about Beirut. I'm diversifying! Next...I will write about FLOWERS! ;) U been naughty!
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 3:26:00 PM
    Your first one and it is brilliant! I had no doubt. Sometimes the best help is no help. You are a natural and this reads like magic. Well done, you should be very proud of your work. The second will be easier. It will however be difficult to top this exceptional piece. 777777 fav

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/8/2013 11:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Really, Richard? No doubt! It squeezed my mind to the limits....I had to delete my first posting, but I'm a hopeless perfectionist and once you told me I needed another stanza...I couldn't let it stand...limping! Thanks for pointing that out! You know how I feel about your terzanelle, so this post is doubly precious! 7 and a fav. I'm honored, Richard.
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 10:21:00 AM
    Oh Eileen, my Hot Queen, soon we'll need a fire extinguisher on site, my my, why don't we start a little contest on soup, we can all write one sultry write, what do you say, have to go to work now, I'll smoke things up in here later, kiss hugs, and be good, that is if you can, he he xxx

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/9/2013 12:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sultry, Sexy, Sensual....it seems S is a naughty letter! ;) Yes, what don't we do that? The fire extinguisher is of NO USE, my dear...It might work for this blaze, but those fires keep starting in the most uncalled for places! ;) I saw you've started a blaze with your tongue poem....Shall I come to douse the flames? ;) LOVE YA! We can all blame Drake for starting this with his latest poem!
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 10:14:00 AM
    ohh, a searing write subtly indicating your sensual desires... it's getting hot in here, eileen... love this; over the top!..:) huggs

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/9/2013 12:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, sweet Nette! You are such a dear to encourage me like this. Yes...sometimes it does get HOT doesn't it? Well, thank God for creating us with the ability to endure the heat! ;)
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 9:06:00 AM
    "Need", "Pulls", "Hunger", "Pulsating"...yes. I approve of this message. So, while I dive in a body of water somewhere in the Arctic, I will applaud you in grand unison while I cool off.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/8/2013 11:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    As yummy as...... ;) I make a good plate of that dish too!
    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/8/2013 9:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HAAAA! You have your way of being "subtle", so do I. ;-) But, all half-jokes aside, this was bold. Spicy. Yummy!
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/8/2013 9:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My thinks "thrusts" and COME and cucumber... ;) are a bit more OVERT? COME now...what do you say? Pun.....undecided! HA HA!
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/8/2013 9:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh Drake....me likes your post! Well, what would you say about the previous post of ours...Is my work more....subtle or yours? Do tell....Once you get back from the Arctic, that is! ;)