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Awaken Me

Before the glow of crimson dawn appears  
When nighttime’s sapphire still embraces me  
Let loving whispers fall upon my ears 

Arouse me from the night’s tranquility 
Remove the silk and slip away the lace 
Convince me I am yours exclusively  
	
Enfold me tightly in your warm embrace   
Slip softly in my morning fantasy  
And love me gently, heartbeat keeping pace 

Before the morning comes so brilliantly  
With softened hue and sunshine on my face
Awaken me within this ecstasy 

And now that you’ve awakened me with style 
Come back with me to dreamland for a while 


© Rebecca L ~ August 2013

*Terza Rima Sonnet (Iambic Pentameter) for Craig's contest – Won 1st place! 






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  1. Date: 12/30/2013 2:30:00 PM

    Wow very intense and seductive great work.

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 8:54:00 AM

    This write is full of passion and seduction. The reader can feel your devotion to this special person. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Contagious poem. I appreciate it.

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 10:49:00 PM

    This, I must say, is intimacy written with style! The subject and the form have met in seamless compatibility within this poem.

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 4:27:00 PM

    Nice...

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 4:23:00 PM

    This work is awesome!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 6:30:00 AM

    I love this one...congrats on your win Becca

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:01:00 AM

    Congrats on winning the place in the contest, Becca

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 10:35:00 PM

    Dear Becca : This is so lovely in its flow and meaning. You are a true poetess . Love, SuZ

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:48:00 PM

    simply beautiful Becca...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 9:59:00 PM

    The last stanza hits this poem out of the park.......tender and softly descriptive work.

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:49:00 PM

    A very beautiful and dreamy piece of poetry! I love how well your words flow with your rhymes. Fantastic work!...Thank you for your kind comments on my poem, "Alone". It really means a lot to me!.... I will be responding to your soupmail :)

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 3:59:00 PM

    I thought for sure I had commented here--darn--anyhow this was obviously a first rate--everything about this, the meter the syllable count, the rhyme and not to be outdone by the message. Bravo Becca

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 2:51:00 PM

    Beautifully written Becca....congrats on a awesome write and win! Hugs

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 6:44:00 PM

    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 5:00:00 PM

    Congratulations Becca, No suprise this hit No 1 spot. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 1:31:00 PM

    Ahh!!! Enjoyed reading your creative winning work.Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 7:43:00 AM

    It's nice to see that a poet can embrace what it real and beautiful in such an elegant way.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 8/11/2013 9:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    aw thank you, Duke. It's nice to be able to express these feelings in poetry. thank you for your lovely comment.
  1. Date: 8/10/2013 3:54:00 PM

    Your poetry is soft and pastel tendered, congrats on your win Becca, xxx

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 8/11/2013 8:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    aw that's a nice description, I love that! Thank you :)
  1. Date: 8/10/2013 12:36:00 PM

    Congratulations Becca, on placing 1st in the contest with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~Caryl

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 8/10/2013 12:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Caryl, congrats on your placement too!
  1. Date: 8/10/2013 8:54:00 AM

    congrats on a great win Becca....beautiful

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 8/10/2013 12:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    congratulations to you too, your poem is amazing
    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 8/10/2013 12:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 8/9/2013 8:42:00 PM

    Wow, Becca....Amazing....Full of passion that is sweetly awakend....Congrats on this wonderful piece....

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 8/10/2013 12:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Eileen, congrats to you too :)
  1. Date: 8/9/2013 8:29:00 PM

    A lovely winning poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 8/10/2013 12:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Joyce, congrats to you too!
  1. Date: 8/9/2013 6:43:00 PM

    It appears I was right he loved it to number one! Congratulations Becca.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 8/10/2013 12:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Rick :) Congratulations to you too.
  1. Date: 8/9/2013 4:30:00 PM

    now when did you sneak this one up. I could swear I was at your page just yesterday and didn't see this one. It's superb, Becca. BIG congrats for your worthy win.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 8/10/2013 12:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea! Congrats to you too.
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 6:18:00 PM

    This is a beautiful piece. I really love the meter and the elegant wording. Very nice.

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 5:14:00 PM

    It was difficult for the heartbeat to keep pace with this write Becca, you are so subtle and yet, and yet. and yet haha. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 11:43:00 AM

    this is beautiful Becca.....I love it.....fav.....hugs

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 6:57:00 AM

    Never written a "Terza Rima" but you have intrigued me with this brilliant write! Maybe I'll give it a shot! Good luck dear friend, jugs, Jack xoxox

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 6:19:00 AM

    This is spectacular Becca, I am sure Craig will love it.

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 8:12:00 PM

    What a brilliantly written write my friend! This is a terrific and ingenious poem! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this evening, I just love poems of inspiration such as this, Great Work Becca!!

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