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'Erratic'

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'Erratic'


erratic kisses spreads tenderness to my core unruly response
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  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:27:00 AM
    soup mail

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 3:50:00 AM
    the unruly responses are the best but do you write longer works? I find the longer the poem the deeper the you go.

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 1:41:00 PM
    Good one :))

  1. Date: 8/10/2013 10:47:00 PM
    Nicely done. Kisses that make you feel warm and toasty

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 10:38:00 AM
    Okay a little light poetry hahaha you killed it excellent poetry poet

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 5:45:00 PM
    Ooh-la-la, homegirl. Talk about erotic - sorry, erratic. A nice hottie, Wilma. Hey, beautiful new pic. I like, very much. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 6:59:00 AM
    Sounds pretty wild to me... yummy! Big warm hugs, Jack xoxox

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 2:22:00 PM
    this is sexy! I love that phrase, "unruly" response!!

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 1:56:00 PM
    I love the self awareness of this, and the title is befitting , enjoyed your senryu, and always a pleasure to hear from you love xxx

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 9:51:00 AM
    Yes yes yes..."Unruly response" is powerful in this senyru..I love it..awesome imagery...was waiting on your to post another poem.. :) hugs beautiful.

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 9:14:00 AM
    Wow this is so very masterfully done my friend! I really loved reading this tremendously awesome poem here this morning! What a delightful piece, quite the amazing poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 8:22:00 AM
    Goosebumps EVERYWHERE! Yes! Lose control! Excellent!

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 8:00:00 AM
    Why you wanna do this to me Wilma? Are you purposely trying to torture me? Lucky guy! Cold shower awaits...Yikes! TOO cold...

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 7:27:00 AM
    an urge you cannot fight, enjoyed your senryu, ~always, Linda