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  1. Date: 3/12/2014 2:07:00 PM
    A distillation of pure and simple feelings. Nothing more is required and, in fact, would just get in the way.

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 10:07:00 AM
    Good morning Becca.

  1. Date: 2/14/2014 12:26:00 PM
    Just got back home late last night. Today is my first day back at work. How are you doing Becca?

  1. Date: 1/21/2014 8:11:00 AM
    When we expose our emotions we reveal our true strength. I enjoyed reading this one again.

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 11:03:00 AM
    Short and sweet and makes sense. First meaning bcarrying over to the second paragraph. Short sharp and to the point.

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 3:42:00 PM
    sweet and shy Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 7:45:00 AM
    Nice to see a sensual gal.

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 2:59:00 AM
    Tnks for introducing me to the septolet..I might try it on later in these days.Very sugary sweet..Lovely

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 2:54:00 PM
    Perfect Becca! Love the message and use of the form.

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 6:16:00 AM
    Beautiful in it's simplicity.

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 5:12:00 PM
    Aawwwww...its all we want....terrific Becca.

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 4:27:00 PM
    Will my coat do for a now Becca lol, Lovely write. So emotional for so few words. Take care,Richard

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 9:18:00 AM
    A heart beating to be held in its fragility. Yearning for a dialect that needs no translations. Excellent lines.

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 9:04:00 AM
    I remember the Septolet now, I had forgotten about that form, it's nice to see it used again! This is a brilliant write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this morning! You have expressed yourself perfectly with your limited number of words that you have written! What a lovely piece, so awesome Becca!! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 8:24:00 AM
    Hi Becca, Happy to see you back. This is a cute little write from a tender heart!!

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 7:16:00 AM
    You have out dodded yourdelf my dear Becca. So sweet... big hugs, Jack xoxox

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 8/7/2013 7:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    out dooded... yourdelf??? LOL
  1. Date: 8/7/2013 5:25:00 AM
    Tender and sweet! I love it!