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Make Me Hate Your Face

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Make Me Hate Your Face

I focus on things
that make me hate your face.
Maybe then the pain will fade.

I know deep inside
I care about your life,
but right now I just want to forget.

You don't understand,
never will,
how you've pierced my heart.

I wish I could say
it will just go away,
but the blade cut too deep.

I feel the blood,
it trickles down my chest,
and it draws me to my knees.

I fall to the floor,
pray it will all finish now,
maybe this pain will finally be undone.

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  1. Date: 11/28/2009 11:58:00 PM
    The pains of love, great write, Bettinna.

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 10:35:00 AM
    Betty - ocngrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 10:27:00 AM
    This write shows raw emotion, definitely worthy of a feature.....:JP]

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 7:17:00 AM
    A lot of heartfelt emotion! The best way to get over it is to forgive. I know it sounds Cli-ch'e but you shouldn't waste a thought on them . they don't for you, and it just makes you bitter.

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 7:33:00 PM
    Interesting poem. Congratulations on your being featured this week. Happy Thanksgiving! Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 7:33:00 PM
    Interesting poem. Congratulations on your being featured this week. Happy Thanksgiving! Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 11:48:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your poetry being shared with us this week >> James

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 8:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Betty. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 3:02:00 AM
    Excellent write and well deserving selection for being featured this week. Best wishes and keep writing. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

  1. Date: 11/22/2009 5:43:00 PM
    The emotion comes through your words in this one. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen