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Your dream is dead

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Your dream is dead

They all gathered 'round some tittered others smiled
The chesty one with the long legs glared,
Nothing can be more inconsiderate than to be told "no"
Your dream is dead

                                                                     8/1/'13

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  1. Date: 8/14/2013 7:47:00 AM

    sorry for the double comment.... LINDA

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 7:45:00 AM

    sounds to me as if some peeps can handle being turned down. It's life... all I have to say, when one dream is dead.. search for another... I think this write needs more, and can do without the word tittered... who uses that word anyways... Gabe, this is more like a thought... thank you for sharing the emotions of the heart.... LINDA

    Shelly Avatar Gabe Shelly Date: 8/14/2013 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're right. It is a thought. gabe
  1. Date: 8/14/2013 7:44:00 AM

    sounds to me as if some peeps can handle being turned down. It's life... all I have to say, when one dream is dead.. search for another... I think this write needs more, and can do without the word tittered... who uses that word anyways... Gabe, this is more like a thought... thank you for sharing the emotions of the heart.... LINDA