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Her Climactic Silence

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Her Climactic Silence

I wanted you,
Near

I needed you,
Clear

Sipping desires from cucumber water
Wanton condensation
Sliding
Upon glassy downward slope

Mimicking penetrated thrusts against your core

Beyond gravitational motives, I will take you

Lip transformations unto your incipient hymns

How deep may I go
To make your roots blossom

Will tomorrow suffice?

Or do your heartstrings crave for gentle tugs
Of your chocolate scalp
Observing your cremated lyric
Spread across my precious love

Will you come
Undone

May I taste your enigmatic pores
Encompassed within Chopin sonatas

Will you let my chords rest
Within your lilac sensuality

Letting every carnal heartbeat
Latch onto peaks
Of muted want

Your moist, poignant skin
Screaming its answer

©Drake J. Eszes

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  1. Date: 2/28/2014 6:27:00 AM
    Drake darlin' drinking in the nectar of this sensually written poem as ones skin screams from the gentle warmth! sigh....:)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/28/2014 9:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, oh yes. ;-) Thank you, Mary Jo.
  1. Date: 12/27/2013 9:21:00 AM
    playa, playaaaaaa!!! ;)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/27/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    >) Word.
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 7:34:00 AM
    Sensual, and hot in its own way. A different style than how I portrayed, yet still just as enjoyable.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 10/31/2013 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And that's the key. ;-) Tasteful, yet sensually delicious. All dates should go this way. =D Thank you so much, Jay!
  1. Date: 9/23/2013 5:08:00 AM
    I had a ball reading the comments, nothing much left to say......you are AWESOME Drake!!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 9/23/2013 7:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Varsha!! :) It's been awhile. Thank you very much for that. =D
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 7:11:00 PM
    Waiting for a new poem....passed by one of my favs....You sure like lavender and lilac...A man of taste....

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 9/9/2013 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I do. ;-) You're waiting for a new one? I just posted my last one yesterday. lol You're cute. Thank you, Eileen!
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 7:22:00 PM
    I think I saw some scorches in the corners of the page here. Deeply sensual and then some. My skin is screaming " inspired" ...

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/30/2013 11:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's just hot & awesome! =D Thanks so much, Karen!
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 4:38:00 PM
    You must be in love.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/29/2013 4:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Nope. Just writing sensual poetry.
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 1:55:00 AM
    Reading your poem is better than listening to Barry White .

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/19/2013 7:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOVE IT! =D Ha. Thank you, Beverly!
  1. Date: 8/16/2013 4:09:00 PM
    one should have known with a title such as this that the piece would be erotic and sensual,,,love the way you penned this, so glad i chose to read this one! Well Done Drake!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/16/2013 4:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, the subtle title that this poem has. :) I do greatly appreciate you stopping by, Sandra!
  1. Date: 8/14/2013 6:31:00 PM
    touching Drake very descriptive and tiillating subject

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/14/2013 6:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awesome. That was the goal. :) Thanks so much, Ruth! Good to see you around again!
  1. Date: 8/14/2013 6:32:00 AM
    wow Drake very sensual and most poignant one for favs Ty for posting it Shadow x smiles

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/14/2013 7:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you SO much, Shadow. =D I do appreciate that! Hey, you should try to call in on Sunday for the show! It'll still be daylight for you. =)
  1. Date: 8/13/2013 8:18:00 AM
    SIZZLING HOTNESS!! I have come! ;-)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/13/2013 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey there! Very cool to meet you! Thanks so much for stopping by, Amada! Is it Amada or Amanda? Either way, cool name! =D
  1. Date: 8/12/2013 12:07:00 PM
    Oh my Drake....this is SUCCULENT! I could feel my roots blossoming with each delicious word.Screaming skin, yes indeed!!!....lol. This is excellent! Hugs

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/12/2013 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awesome! This is a touching & delicious comment from you. =D Thank you kindly, Cecilia!
  1. Date: 8/12/2013 9:49:00 AM
    Hot one Drake!! Beautiful. Betty

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/12/2013 10:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi & thank you so much, Betty! =D
  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:06:00 AM
    Good morning Drake, have a great day.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/9/2013 7:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Buenos dias, Richard! You too! =D
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 5:25:00 PM
    Yes, Yes, Yes, xxx

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/9/2013 7:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    =D
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 3:39:00 PM
    Geez, I'm reading nothing but hotties today, but this one has me all afire. Shame on you, Drake (lol). Hey, way to go!! Licia :-)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/8/2013 4:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha! No shame in how I roll, Delysia. =) Thanks so much!
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 11:46:00 AM
    will wrap up soon... are you there?... happy thursday, drake... looking forward to your new masterpice...:) huggs

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/8/2013 4:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sure am! =) Happy Thursday (Friday now for you), Nette! You're too kind. =)
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 10:39:00 AM
    I'm an oldie Drake, well i was till i read this, nice one, and yes dare i say it, inspirational,,,,,

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/8/2013 11:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're only as old as you feel. I hear you there. =) Very cool to meet you & thanks for stopping by here!
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 9:19:00 AM
    Hey, Mr Veggies are Good for YOU! Me thinks you need to come back to my poem and answer a challenging question I left at your door....or...where you are splashing around in the Arctic...Come on!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/8/2013 9:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HAAAAA! Ok. =P
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