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Haiku 72

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Haiku 72

	
	
	
	Haiku 72
	
	summer Sunday blues
	shadows hide behind my eyes
	this dark afternoon
	
	
	

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  1. Date: 8/6/2013 10:32:00 PM
    Hi Jack; i hope you don't have too many days like that. We all go through those every now and then. Thanks for sharing.... lucilla

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 8/7/2013 7:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Not too many, Lucilla. Thanks for your concern... Jack
  1. Date: 8/6/2013 3:21:00 PM
    Interesting Haiku..Enjoyed reading though it seems a little sad..Sara

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 8/6/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Sara. It was a sad day. Nothing in particular,,, just sad... Jack
  1. Date: 8/6/2013 2:53:00 PM
    If you have blue eyes, that gives it even more imagery!! glad to see this one today and I hope your blues get chased away!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 8/6/2013 3:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Blue feelings, that is...
    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 8/6/2013 3:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I hadn't thought about blue eyes, but I do have them. Blues are better...
  1. Date: 8/6/2013 9:20:00 AM
    summer and dark.. what a beautiful contrast and a delightful juxtaposition.. well done, again and again, jacck!..:)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 8/6/2013 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Nette. I appreciate the comment.
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:12:00 AM
    There are some strong hidden messages between these few lines. Fantastic job!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 8/5/2013 11:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Drake. I value your comments... Jack