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Ice King

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Ice King

ice cube kills warm palm
till pain releases tight grip;
reminiscent of first date.
 
the wet sting melts slow
enters tingling blood flow;
loving sensation.

Copyright © 2013 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Sixth Place Winner ~ "Ice King" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Skat-Oz
Aug. 15, 2013

It made me think of my first date and how his cold hand 
felt when he first held mine but after a few minutes my 
blood turned warm with loving sensations.

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  1. Date: 8/23/2013 11:25:00 AM

    Creative winning work..Uniquely written..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 12:12:00 AM

    good seeing this one again. It was one of my favorites in this contest. Congrats.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:53:00 AM

    Bravo Caryl, great win in Skat’s contest on this interesting challenge!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 4:53:00 PM

    Hi Caryl, , love the win, and icy feeling after reading your poem. Congratulations... luv~ LINDA

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:12:00 PM

    - It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Caryl! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:00:00 PM

    CONGRATULATIONS CARYL ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 3:08:00 PM

    oh my goodness. To relate this to someone's hand. SO painful it must have been to hold his hand. gives new meaning to "cold as a fish" this is very creative!!