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I want you

Ken Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled I want you which was written by poet Ken Carroll. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I want you

I want you
the spark of your eyes
overshadows the neon lights

I seek you
everything that you are
the center of your being

I adore you
I need you
I love you

Where I am now
the wind kills
tongue turns small together

I want you
a constant gallop of hunger
mounted by need

My shadow is blurring
the evening fire going out
I'm losing myself too

I want you
until you are here
I smell flowers with no aroma...

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  1. Date: 9/27/2013 12:10:00 AM
    mmm Yes! Sandyivy

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 3:47:00 AM
    Very strong lines...beautiful

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 8/26/2013 4:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Eileen, Thanks for the wonderful comments and visiting today.. Ken
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 8:49:00 PM
    Thanks for visiting again pretty lady..:-) Yours, Ken....

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 8:38:00 PM
    again! :-) PD

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 6:04:00 PM
    Kenneth, well! well! Love the poem, good things come to those who wait... always~ Linda

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 8/4/2013 6:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda Paloma...So true as patience is a virtue...Good things do come to those who wait.... Yours, Ken..
  1. Date: 8/4/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Romantic lines that you have penned..Enjoyed reading them this evening..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 8/4/2013 5:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    than you Sara,,,Enjoyed reading from you as well.. Ken
  1. Date: 8/4/2013 2:36:00 PM
    Lovely work my friend,it has an intense feel to it Ken.The imagery is a delight to read also.

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 8/4/2013 2:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks my poet buddy...Good to read from you as always M.M... Ken..