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The Knights Reward-The Sequel to Redemption Knight

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The Knights Reward-The Sequel to Redemption Knight

Dragon slain, all set aright
Maiden held in arms so tight  
His blue eyes saw future bright
They reached the castle by night

Bathed and dressed in virgin white
To bedchamber she did alight
He was moved and moaned outright
Suppressed passion did ignite

He forgot what to recite
Every word had taken flight
How she glowed in candle light
He tried to temper his might

With each caress ever slight
He raised her to wondrous height
The night shimmered with delight
Heaven burst upon her sight

How her body did excite
He loved her through day and night
Hopes and dreams she did incite
T’was she who had saved the knight

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 9:23:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading this poem and the fun comments again. I finished the Watch poem Eileen.

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 7:48:00 PM

    my personal opinion, this is better than the last, its what every armour knight wants only a few could reach it.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/12/2013 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    WOW! Thanks for the comment! I really appreciate it. Actually, this was a part of the first one, but the change of rhyme begged for it to be a poem on its own! Thanks for the visit, my dear!
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 7:11:00 AM

    Very captivating story told in poetic form..Great maiden to save the knight..Thanks for the visit to my work..Your presence is always uplifting..Sara

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/5/2013 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Yes....it's good for a change for the woman to get the credit, isn't it, Sara? After all....we do influence our men to great victories. Thanks for the visit! :)
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 6:00:00 AM

    They certainly knew how to live and love in those days, Oh lucky Knight haha. Take care, Richard

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/6/2013 11:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Richard.....Yes...you ARE king. Guess they get the better deal...they don't have to FIGHT for the damsels...they just order one up! You are naughty....always...naughty! Or am I reading into this! Damsels are a plenty...but the sweet, beautiful, caring, and enchanting kind are an endangered species...WHO WILL SAVE US! HA HA HA HA HA HA! ;) You're king...get the ball rolling....(oh dear...)
    Seal Avatar Richard D Seal Date: 8/5/2013 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes I know, Knights are getting scarce, can hardly find enough to fill my round table lol :) maybe there's not sufficient damsels to go round !!!!!!
    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/5/2013 7:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    GRRRRRRR....You have returned from YOUR travles to far off kingdoms! Yes...laptop IS on my lap! ;) Jiggle jiggle
    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/5/2013 7:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mr Seal....you have returned from our travels to FAR OFF KINGDOMS! :) Glad to have you back. It is the damsel who is lucky enough to have a man fight to death to win her heart, hand, and soul....Knights are an endangered species me thinks! What say you?
  1. Date: 8/4/2013 8:03:00 AM

    Ha ha you kill me, the knight must be exhausted. They say once a king always a king. Once a knight is enough. Thanks for taking my suggestion. Enjoyed the sequel.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/5/2013 8:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    WOW! It is a rare man indeed who can admit that! :) You KNOW it's true! :) Warrior Princess mode switched ON!
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/4/2013 8:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ha, ha, I agree women rule!
    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/4/2013 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Once a knight is enough? Really???? How about we sing with Lionel Richie..."All KNIGHT long..." ;)....and day and knight and day again.....
    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/4/2013 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes...thank you for your suggestions! I got two poems instead of one! Double the fun! Double the pleasure! :)
    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 8/4/2013 8:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh RIchard....there you go being all practical again....Yes....he is a knight who never tires.....a knight who is larger than life......a knight whose prowess is beyond imagination! HA HA! It's my dream, remember? Oh...no no no...here is the deal...it's the maiden...the damsel...the piece of heaven he's rescued that brings all that out in him! ;) YES!!! WOMEN RULE!