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Below is the poem entitled Titanic which was written by poet Reason A. Poteet. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Trip to the movies to see ship submerged,
Teasing and torment has been Friday's fare.
First an argument o’er who's to go first,
and not-so-nice nephew pulls brother’s hair.

In revenge, the other bloodies an arm;
loud wailing ensues from crocodile eyes.
It’s time to go home now, they’ve lost their charm.
Six-year old twins – a shipwreck, pint-size.

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  1. Date: 9/17/2013 10:32:00 AM
    nice poem,,,, love the movie and history ;}

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 12:03:00 PM
    A lovely poem with such delightful creative wit.

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 6:26:00 AM
    Very creative work using the CAPTCHA...Enjoyed reading a few moments from your life..Sara

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 3:03:00 PM
    haha, it's adorable, and you got TWO stanzas. Only one I think I saw like this!

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    Date: 8/14/2013 9:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you liked it; I needed to say more than the four/five captcha charcters allowed.
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 7:39:00 AM
    LOL maybe want to put times 2 on here for using letters twice enjoyed the read though and boy sure know this feeling lol great imagery and too play on words as other said thanks for sharing I too did this one

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 12:22:00 PM
    so well put and charming at that.... kids will be kids... love the play of words, reason.. huggs

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 12:16:00 PM
    Love this little alliterative gem. Slips and trips off the tongue so prettily. SuZ

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 9:05:00 AM
    From a mother of boys- you made me smile.

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    Date: 8/4/2013 11:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I've raised two boys myself, and I have grandchildren of both kinds...but this takes me back to the seventies when I used to babysit my niece and nephew.
  1. Date: 8/4/2013 5:50:00 AM
    nicely done gl in contest Shadow x smiles

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    Date: 8/4/2013 11:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Shadow, a neat idea for a brevity piece. I just couldn't keep it a brief one-stanza.