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EXPERIENCED LADY

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EXPERIENCED LADY

                                             Innocence so was allured
                                             she a baby for a chocolate 
                                             captivated with the illusion
                                     thought life's it's own beautiful reason

                                       From straight to bend of back bone
                                          for charade of life no solution 
                                           carnal damage still  going on
                                        now suffering from agoraphobia

                                           Sense of cerebellum sinking
                                         no strength to go for a combat
                                      oh! her sacrificed heart is crushed
                                         cries again but with only vision 

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  1. Date: 8/12/2013 9:33:00 PM
    Hi bl, I am sad for your friend, she is missing out on so much and those who wish to spend time with her miss out as well. Was she abused??

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 8/14/2013 11:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Too some extent she is surely abused, my friend. Thanks for your visit to my page and for your comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 1:18:00 PM
    love the insights and thoughts of this poem , and EXPERIENCED LADY'... one should always move on. the 4th line is a very special. thank you for sharing... Linda

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 8/12/2013 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi! my friend, giving thanks to you a lot for inspiring me. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 8:50:00 AM
    descriptive and well quilled, bl.. we do all suffer from anxiety attacks and your piece delivers... well done!..:) huggs

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 8/11/2013 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comment, my friend. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/6/2013 2:06:00 PM
    Hi Bi; This a sad poem. It is never good to suffer from any kind of phobia. Me I don't like to be in any closed up places, or narrow places. great write. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 8/8/2013 12:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A lot of thanks to you. Sorry for giving thanks lately. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/4/2013 12:23:00 AM
    gosh, this poor lady. Who is she, BL? I feel like she is someone special to you?

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 8/4/2013 12:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    She is not special to me but for one of my friends. My friend, wish you happy friendship Day. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/3/2013 3:22:00 PM
    This person must be a very interesting person who is trapped by her phobia..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 8/3/2013 6:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot, my sweet friend. Always, bl
  1. Date: 8/3/2013 1:45:00 PM
    i iike this, bl... it is so open to many interpretations... enjoyed the whole piece on atonement...well done! :) huggs

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 8/3/2013 2:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A sweet thanks to you for your sweet comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/3/2013 1:15:00 PM
    - A very talented poem bl !! - Wishing you a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 8/3/2013 1:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks my friend for visiting my page and for your inspiration. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 2:56:00 PM
    There are SO many underlying messages here. Wisdom is an unwrapped gift after you discover the mistakes you've made and corrected them. Excellent piece!

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 8/3/2013 12:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot my friend. Loved always..... Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 2:05:00 PM
    hi bl,, this is truly wonderful poetry, i see many aspects here, with sadness, in fact one can feel as one reads this, it is so visual...

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 8/3/2013 12:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A lot of thanks to you my sweet friend for your wonderful comment. Loved always, bl