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Last night i dreamt - Contest

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Last night i dreamt - Contest

I am running along a path
Laughing as i go.
Knowing its you behind me
I am tempted to go slow.

I feel your arms around me
I look with some surprise.
Cos the arm i am looking at
Has more hair than you can surmise

A scream gathered in my throat
Happiness turned to fright.
I cried out your name
A snarl was my reply

I was being dragged into the woods
Saliva running from your lips.
Was i to be supper
My heart did more than flip

Just as you went to bite me
A noise filled my brain.
Panic was more than visible
Then I realized was just a dream.

The noise I heard was my alarm clock
Ringing out the bad news.
That its time to awaken,
For once this wasn't the blues.

Then I remembered what had caused
This nightmare of last night.
Richard Attenborough with his gorillas
Was the reason for the  fright.


Penned -  2 August 2013 - Humorous entry.

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  1. Date: 8/13/2013 3:52:00 PM
    Congratulations Seren, nice poem with the humorous twist at the end.

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 3:20:00 AM
    lovely win Seren...SKAT

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/11/2013 4:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you SKAT
  1. Date: 8/7/2013 11:44:00 PM
    Seren, Congratulations in "Last Night I Dreamt ... contest :-)" xox~~~ always Linda

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/11/2013 4:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda ...Seren
  1. Date: 8/6/2013 2:41:00 PM
    WAY to GO, Seren, You did a great humorous entry. Congrats for your win.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/11/2013 4:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Just my luck that dream Andrea, would turn out to be a hairy monster ..Seren
  1. Date: 8/6/2013 6:42:00 AM
    congrats on your win Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/6/2013 4:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Joseph lovely to see u again ....Seren
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:26:00 PM
    : ) Congratulations on a very fine win, Seren! Enjoyed it! Annalise

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/6/2013 4:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Annalise ...Seren
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:11:00 PM
    no tv watching at night for you ... congrats Seren on your 3rd place win in the humorous category

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/6/2013 4:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thx Francine ...Seren
  1. Date: 8/3/2013 4:33:00 PM
    I like this, it drew me in. Very good story telling. :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/5/2013 4:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi April ......thanks for stopping by.....Seren
  1. Date: 8/3/2013 12:04:00 AM
    wow i dont know which was the most scarier the dram or the poem,, amazing write Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/5/2013 4:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol Harry, so nice see you back ....Seren
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 12:07:00 PM
    Love it Seren---way too much fun!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/5/2013 4:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Craig thanks ....Seren
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 10:12:00 AM
    I predict you will be on the list. And not just because she is getting few humorous entries. This one is really good!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/2/2013 1:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea, being on the list isnt always the case, as i have found out....Seren
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 5:42:00 AM
    Ha ha, lol, this is quite the funny write my friend! I've had the same type of dream where I was being chased but then found out it was someone (or something) else that was chasing me! Then you find out it was a dream, hilariously you are relieved, but it stays nagging in the back of your mind all day long! What a fantastic piece Seren, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/2/2013 7:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you once more Russell.....Seren