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I wish, Oh I wish

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I wish, Oh I wish

A huge monstrous olive tree not giving shade nor bearing fruits, existing in pains and disappointments together with the others, they live is the exact expression of my grieve. Too hypocritical in being aggressive and defeated by the contraceptive of my try condemn and make me believe I'm failure's chief executive. How am I to know that every attempt completed is success' eve? How am I to know that more failure is effective? How am I to know that I ought to be vigilant and be patient like a detective? faulting the situation, myself I deceive and landing in this mess surely wasn't my motive I should have been more creative instead of staying sensitive to my senses and searching for palliative methods of scoring my goal. I shouldn't have used my cognitive functions this way, perceiving challenges as dangers always attentive to the red light when it is in fact yellow. Running away, when the push seems less attractive and summing up the crash to be definitive. For all these years the agony has been an adhesive to my soul. comparative to a privileged bridegroom who outslept his wedding to an undeserving bride. As descriptive as that, mine is even more corrosive. Now I pay taxes to sadness and my regret more lucrative than ever before as nature chooses my heart to be the dwelling place of sorrow keeping my self-ruin well preserved. I've tried to turn back time I've tried to apply similar energy and pretense is now my best talent but all I get is NOTHING! I'm only left with wishes a million times have I made them and a million times more I'll proclaim them but they will all stand as cup-bearers to my constant regrets. as I forever say........ I wish! Oh I wish!

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  1. Date: 11/21/2013 10:19:00 PM
    Yes! FIGHT ON!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 11/22/2013 10:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot James Marshall Goff
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 8:46:00 AM
    From wishes new realities are born. Keep on wishing my friend.

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 11/22/2013 10:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yeah Richard... Thanks a lot
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:51:00 AM
    ur talented Funom! wonderful write!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 11/6/2013 8:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Elai
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 10:40:00 AM
    i love it!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 11/6/2013 8:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Cathi