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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 8/1/2013 6:27:00 AM
    Hi Cassie What a powerful emotive poem. If this is a true account, it reads like hell on earth. I believe we have a loving/perfect Father up above to heal our personal wounds and life scars. Self harm is a dangerous addiction-- I know, I have been there. Read my "Red Scarlet Heart".. Welcome to P/Soup.

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 10:17:00 PM
    Sharp poem, razor sharp ending. What powerful & ominous lines! Excellent job!

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 8:22:00 PM
    Wow!!! I'm sorry but I used a bad word earlier after reading this poem twice it came right before AWESOME!!! I love this poem, the rhythm, everything! And the ending..."Just politely ask for a size 9" So clever! Can't wait to read more from you and Yes Welcome to Poetry Soup! Making this poem a Favorite! Oh and by the way the word I used earlier started with an "F", excited!!! MC