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Into the Gloaming

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Into the Gloaming

Into the gloaming, honed by rasps of one lone star, fireflies weave their magic through the last of the golden haze A pensive cricket hum, uncoils from the thick green maze to circle upwards, and around the rim of declining sun Fireflies weave their magic through the last of the golden haze Of this darkening of earth, there are bright partakers to circle upwards, and around the rim of a declining sun as birdsongs of the summer day are put to rest Of this darkening of earth, there are bright partakers A pensive cricket hum uncoils from the thick green maze As birdsongs of the summer day are put to rest, into the gloaming, honed by rasps of one lone star
________________________________________________________________ Inspired By Andrea's Contest: "One in Three--Write Beautifully" 7/31/13

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  1. Date: 8/11/2013 1:49:00 PM
    Creative and expressive winning work..I am glad that I chose this winner to read today.Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:47:00 PM
    good one............SKAT

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 6:41:00 AM
    You write in pretty pictures. Congrats

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 1:24:00 AM
    This one was magical, Carrie!! I just loved it. Soupmail

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 9:57:00 PM
    an awesome win Carrie... xox...Linda

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 10:35:00 AM
    Magnifique Carrie, I was drawn into the images you painted here!

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 10:31:00 PM
    My goodness. This is absolutely gorgeous. "Pensive cricket hum"...damn.