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haiku 6

clear cool blue water
the sunshine hot on my back
flip flops in the sand 

©donna jones

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  1. Date: 1/14/2014 12:30:00 PM

    Donna, ------ ~ Did you really think I'd leave without stopping by to say Good-bye. Never, Muwahahahaha! Why the word alone sounds -forever and difficult. LOL, I love this place and the poets. A couple of soup friends and I are taking a short vacation. REMEMBER! The Best Thing About Leaving is the "RETURN." I will leave in good faith, in hopes you don't forget me, and you are looking forward in having me visit you and your poems in the future. HAHA, I will bring a new me when I return. "I Can't wait to see you again:) If you ever want me to read a certain poem or you wish to say hi... Drop by my E-Mail Address. apoetdestroyer@yahoo.com :) Sincerely yours ~Always & Forever~ The Sweet Poet Destroyer

  1. Date: 12/30/2013 6:15:00 PM

    Wonderful write so visual. well done. hope your ok. warm best wishes. Pete.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 12/31/2013 6:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Peter! I'm doing fine....except for the cold..burrr
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 2:23:00 AM

    Oh summer.....sigh. Alas, she is no more (almost). Lovely haiku! I'm back (for however long) :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 4:57:00 PM

    I do love the haiku ;}

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 1:24:00 PM

    Very nice! As Richard says, a good mental vacation. Haven't heard from you in a while. I hope all is well. BTW, I like your new photo a lot... Jack

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 3:40:00 PM

    dropped back to see if any new poems. either way I enjoyed this serene piece again, a mental trip to the beach.

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 9:52:00 PM

    Very vivid images. I like! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 6:30:00 AM

    can see it Donna feel the sun nicely done Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 9:30:00 AM

    what a heady feel, this one, donns... you make me reel!.:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 2:25:00 PM

    Simple pleasures are the best. Your depiction surely passed that test. :)

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 5:30:00 AM

    Good morning Donna, came by for another peek at your summer paradise, have a day filled with peace, hugs xxx

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 2:04:00 AM

    Quaint and adorable! I loved it, well done!

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 5:32:00 PM

    Awww summer... best time of the year! Love it my dear Donna lady! Big hugs, Jack-o! xoxox

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 10:42:00 PM

    Love the images, Donna..nice haiku!!

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 7:39:00 AM

    Donna, a lovely haiku gives one a sense of peace and tranquility, well done, Constance

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 8/3/2013 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Than you very much....
  1. Date: 8/3/2013 7:02:00 AM

    A nice haiku. Sure wish I were there. At least, I can dream .ake care, Jancarl

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 8/3/2013 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks........feels great! :-)
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 6:10:00 PM

    Hate shoes myself....Flipflops most of the time..Nice image

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 8/3/2013 5:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Richard...
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 6:09:00 PM

    Hate shoes myself....Flipflops most of the time..Nice image

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 5:47:00 PM

    Hi Donna, I like the new photo, you look very relaxed. Thanks for your visit and comment today.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 8/3/2013 5:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Richard...just a squeezed down version of my bio pic..... and I always enjoy your work...
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 10:36:00 AM

    wish i was there

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 8/3/2013 5:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Maybe we should all go.....:-)
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 7:11:00 AM

    This is very nice Donna. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 8/3/2013 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Lucilla
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 6:30:00 AM

    Nicely penned Donna.I envision a caribbean scenery here,afterall I am from the caribbean.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 8/3/2013 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Bet it is lovely!!!!
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 3:15:00 AM

    Soup mail...

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 1:30:00 AM

    I love this and the images it evokes.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 8/3/2013 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea....nice to see you...
  1. Date: 8/1/2013 5:00:00 PM

    Ahh!!! Reads like a fun day at the beach maybe..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 8/3/2013 5:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sara..
  1. Date: 8/1/2013 1:59:00 PM

    - That's how it is on my holiday ... well written Donna. - (I'm on vacation). All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 8/3/2013 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hope you are having a wonderful time....
  1. Date: 8/1/2013 8:41:00 AM

    I think I will head to the beach, another hot one here in Kelowna. Enjoyed your Haiku

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 8/1/2013 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    See ya there Richard......bring all your friends and family!!!!
  1. Date: 8/1/2013 7:43:00 AM

    So you're a beach-bum like me?...A woman after my own heart...Very kool and very hot haiku my friend!...By the way, I would love to see the face that goes with those brown eyes AND what you're looking up at too - Tim

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 8/1/2013 12:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey...glad you liked it Tim.....soup mail....
  1. Date: 8/1/2013 6:35:00 AM

    gives a great picture.wonderful!.(:cJenish

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 8/1/2013 12:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much...
  1. Date: 7/31/2013 8:00:00 PM

    This is true summer here, exactly how I envision it to be! You descriptions were spot on and gave us the opportunity to feel the summer from our own past perspective! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem this evening! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 8/1/2013 12:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Russell....very kind....
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