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Secret admiration

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Secret admiration

When she comes with her kids to the pool
My admiring eyes
Walks all over her.
Hair
Breast
Legs
Feet
Toes
hands
Finally face
They are all so perfect
Curves in right place and right size
I cannot reveal my admiration, because
She is too young and
I am too old

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  1. Date: 8/7/2013 7:09:00 AM
    Good morning, I hope you have been restored to full health.

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 8:45:00 AM
    Hello Manel, wow.. how sad when we feel we don't compare. and one more time Manel.. wow... love the way you described her lusty body from head to toe.. love~ SKAT

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 8:14:00 AM
    It is not a crime to tell her how you admire her beauty. The world would be a better place if we did more of that! Hugs, Jack xoxox

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 5:40:00 AM
    Your honest and goodness speaks volumes, often beauty is a shared gift, she is probably admiring something in you too, the bright awareness of life and it's surrounding, love to you M, xxx

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 2:47:00 AM
    It's beautiful to admire in that way...no matter what age we are, & the soul lingers with beauty...lovely poem Manel, takecare & blessings always x Cherie<3

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 1:50:00 PM
    Wow! this is some admiration. Manel - it is not a crime to admire someone. take care and God bless you... Lucilla

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 8/5/2013 8:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I agree. May be if one is shy it would be a secret admiration. Thank you my friend
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 12:04:00 PM
    .... you are beautiful Manel! - Unfortunately, we are not forever young. - Good written poems - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 8/5/2013 8:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dearest Anne
  1. Date: 8/4/2013 11:27:00 PM
    She is young and you are old. It does not matter Manel, you heart is still young. Nice write. Enjoyed. Thanks for your comment on my poem.

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 8/4/2013 11:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes Ravi, Age doesn't exist for admiration, Thanks
  1. Date: 8/3/2013 8:58:00 AM
    I hope you are well Manel, I have not seen you in a few days.

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 8/4/2013 11:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard, Yes I am forced to be in bed for few days, Thank you for your concern
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 4:50:00 PM
    This is so good!!! You have captured a mans mind and revealed it's secret. This one made me smile.

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 8/4/2013 11:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I have captured it slightly. Cannot fathom fully, Ha! ha!