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Haiku 2

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Below is the poem entitled Haiku 2 which was written by poet Shadow Hamilton. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Haiku 2

soft clouds rolling by 
back lit by blazing gold sun
gentle rain drops fall

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eagle soars and dives 
now  just a speck in the sky
tumbling falling down

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  1. Date: 8/1/2013 6:33:00 AM
    rain with sun. great!(??Jenish

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/2/2013 2:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Jenish sometimes that happens more than you realise whence rainbows glad you saw its beauty Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 8/1/2013 6:30:00 AM
    How beautifully written, Shadow! I've just recently started to learn and understand haukis. I hope one day I can write something as good as yours too :D xoxo Dipika

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/2/2013 2:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    poet is a learning curve I learned to write them a couple ago months ago read the forms as there are both modern and traditional, nature themes for haukis and tanya are people related If You enjoy writing haukis try writing a Villanella they are fun Shadow x smiles gl
  1. Date: 7/31/2013 10:59:00 PM
    Very nicely written, especially the top one, loved them both...Peter

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/2/2013 2:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Peter so nice of you to take time to read glad you enjoyed them Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/31/2013 2:43:00 PM
    So nice when someone puts down in poetic pen such moments in life. I think that I will just sit and enjoy the gentle rain. :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/2/2013 2:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Robert Ty for visiting my work and for getting enjoyment from it Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 11:19:00 AM
    Ahh!! I could see that scene..I wonder if the eagle was on the death flight with his possible mate?...Enjoyed reading your descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 6:29:00 AM
    You are becoming a master of the Haiku form.Loved your haikus and the magic you created in each line.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/30/2013 6:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    dearest M.M Ty don't know about the master bit lol just glad that you enjoyed them Love Shadow xox smiles
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 12:51:00 AM
    these are beautiful, Shadow. I like the movement in them!!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/30/2013 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    so kind of you Andrea I enjoy writing Hauki''s Shadow x smiles