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PERILOUS

Your touch is
an electric shock
good thing I am not
in a bucket full of water
 
Your kiss is
a roaring flame
my mouth is filled
with flammable liquid
 
Your love is
a shaky ladder
I climb to the top
and invite gravity’s
inevitable seduction
 
 
 
©roysodavid12-11ARR

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  1. Date: 8/17/2013 10:57:00 PM

    ROY, CONGRATULATIONS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 10:04:00 PM

    Hello Roy, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA *

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 12:32:00 PM

    Hi Roy, wow.. love is awesome, well I don't know about the ladder climb,, the fall seems endless.... ,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 11:27:00 AM

    very good !

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 9:49:00 AM

    - Hello new member: Roy. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 5:02:00 AM

    Love can strike you in many ways, in many places. Welcome to the Soup. Rick

    Batts Avatar Roy Batts Date: 7/30/2013 5:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Rick. I am glad to be here.
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 9:41:00 PM

    about your poem: wow.. with the passion... and ha, i love the line, "good thing I am not in a bucket full of water" the line had me smiling.. xox Linda

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 9:38:00 PM

    Hello Roy -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

    Batts Avatar Roy Batts Date: 7/30/2013 5:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, I will check it out.