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Traditional Cinquain Three

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Traditional Cinquain Three

Screaming
towards heaven
while angels sit on clouds
is it possible they are not
hearing


I have not written one of these in a while 
was motivated by Drakes first cinquain.
Great first attempt at this form Drake.

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  1. Date: 8/2/2013 3:18:00 AM
    Well done true to form great write, loved the imagery, angels sitting on clouds, perfect, thanks for haring, blessings sueellen

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 6:25:00 AM
    Short and very powerful. Loved it

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/31/2013 6:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again Monterey, you are up early as well. I got up early to work on my Knight Rises poem. Finally finished making changes to it.
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 4:12:00 PM
    Oooooooh I really love this one! You managed to jam pack a lot into just a few lines! Way to go. :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/30/2013 7:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne!
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 7:11:00 AM
    :) They hear...they sometimes need us to become stronger.... Lovely...as all your work is! BTW...in your notes...have not written....(present perfect tense) ;) Emphasis on the PERFECT! ;) Like your poem................

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 7/30/2013 8:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!! LOVE your MAMA! She is a sweetie pie! SO..I got to be in her role for a day! WOW! ;)
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/30/2013 7:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha ha, my mom told me yesterday and I was just coming to make the correction. Thanks for pointing it out.
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 8:51:00 PM
    No matter the form, this is a beautiful poem... jack

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/30/2013 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jack
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 5:49:00 PM
    Hello Richard! Thank you for your kindest words and bravo for your nicely written poetic work. G.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/29/2013 5:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My Pleasure Giorgio
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 11:52:00 AM
    =D Well, look at this! You're very kind, Richard, thank you! This was a strong piece. Challenging & questioning the one thing that should be certain...angels. Excellently done!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/29/2013 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Drake, glad you like it.
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 11:13:00 AM
    My angels are on vacation right now. Love Colleen

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/29/2013 11:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I hope they come back quickly.
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 10:58:00 AM
    Good Morning Richard . This is lovely. You are good in any form So sad! The Angels seem to be preoccupied sometimes

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/29/2013 11:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Manel