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Arjn

A challenge to be embraced
Reading instructions not natural for this man
Jostling with my mind grasping for ideas
Notes written hoping to discover a song

Tdwk

Tapping my foot searching for the rhythm
Dancing through waves of confusion
Waiting for inspiration to take my hand
Kissing me softly as we glide accross the page

5pep

5 minutes a snippet of time
Pulsating words bouncing along
Escaping released from my mind
Paper dipped pen sings its own song

I took the captchas that came four in a row attempting to
weave a coherent piece, hopefully this works.

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  1. Date: 8/19/2013 8:25:00 PM

    Okay, this is a cool piece. I really liked it; you have some awesome verses. I glided and floated right along with it. "Dancing through waves of confusion"- when I am jealous that I did not pen that line, I know it's good. Awesome read! :)

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 6:30:00 AM

    I'd say it works. I am impressed! Well done. I absolutely love the last line. Sometimes it feels like the poems are writing themselves and I am only holding the pen, just along for the ride

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/31/2013 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Can totally relate. For me that is the fun in it. Something where something did not previously exist.
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 5:43:00 AM

    Wow, I am so impressed by how well you made those work!! That last line is SO cool. Well done, my friend!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/30/2013 7:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Heather you are very kind ans sweet.
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 10:12:00 AM

    Richard..........WOW! :) I'm SO impressed!!!!! You are one of the first ever to get into my favorite poet file....I daily see reasons why! :)

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 7/30/2013 2:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    OH WOW! OH WOW! OH WOW! OH WOW! OH WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! :) :) :)
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/30/2013 7:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aww thanks Eileen, as you know you are at the top of my favorites list.
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 8:36:00 AM

    Nicely done!!! You had fun with this, I can tell. "Paper dipped pen sings its own song", be sure to change "it's" to "its". :) Either way, that last line made me smile.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/29/2013 8:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Drake, sometimes the auto correct gets me.
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 7:55:00 AM

    Good morning Richard....really liked these......

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/29/2013 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Donna