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Ten Villanelles- Fifth

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Ten Villanelles- Fifth

                           5

Maybe it's much too little much too late
As I try to rectify mistake after mistake
What was shared, I greatly appreciate

Too many times I leave things with fate
Sleeping when I know I should be awake
Maybe it's much too little much too late

A zombie existence my current state
Existing in life, but not able to partake
What was shared, I greatly appreciate

Do we have a chance to clean our slate
If at all possible every effort I will make
Maybe it's much too little much too late

I will be whole, but do not know the date
The lost sea shrinking now's only a lake
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To my words I hope that you can relate
There are some things I won't forsake
Maybe it's much too little much too late
What was shared, I greatly appreciate

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  1. Date: 12/12/2013 4:34:00 AM
    I definitely relate with this one, and your words, I appreciate wholeheartedly. Always, Laura

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    Date: 12/12/2013 12:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for the comment. I wrote these over a couple of days, and now remember this one, because actually with near rhyme it rhymes all the way through, and I didn't like that I remember, but now reading it again, I think I do like it and will probably give it a name. This for me is the thing about comments, let's us revisit our work.