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  1. Date: 8/6/2013 9:50:00 AM

    an awesome win... Nette :-) Congrats... love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 5:26:00 AM

    Yes Congrats, very nice poem, I like this one very much. There's dexterity in your writing Nette.... MC

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:22:00 PM

    congratulations Nette. Nicely done. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 7:54:00 PM

    Nette, Congratulations, In DG's "Dream On" contest... take care...PD

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 6:42:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 6:14:00 AM

    I'll say it again, I am in awe of your talent. This exquisite poem takes the story of pinochio to new emotional highs.

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 10:31:00 PM

    "....time's wish shall fill the request...., /....fine are the ways that dreams...... I know, so nicely done that loved much. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 2:11:00 AM

    Excellent. Lovely sonnet. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 8:37:00 PM

    Belief in magic......yes we may dream....beautiful nette....really enjoyed reading this tonight

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 3:33:00 PM

    So beautiful this is..as beautiful as your heart

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 3:02:00 PM

    One word, Pinocchio! That's exactly what I envision with this write my friend! But I feel more within the confines of this poem than I do in the story of Pinocchio, your piece here is much better in creativity and awe! I really enjoyed reading this fascinating poem this afternoon! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 2:37:00 PM

    Tremendous message here!!! Very strong lines, Netter. =)

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 1:15:00 PM

    A fine write dear Nette.I love the conversational style in this one.I think it contributes to the rhythm of your sonnet.Great job dear poet friend.Hugs

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 1:11:00 PM

    Hey,I am HERE!Beautiful sonnet!!

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 12:57:00 PM

    Still meditating on your interesting poem, my brains are still little.lol Great poem Nette, this one is going straight to my favorites:)..luv Godwins