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  1. Date: 7/28/2013 7:17:00 PM
    Especially the nyc rats...they are very destructive creatures....Ty4sharing...enjoyed:) cherie...

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 6:42:00 AM
    I like the first two lines, the surprise line does not surprise but this piece does have much potential.

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 5:00:00 AM
    One of my favorite forms. Enjoyed. Welcome to the Soup. Rick