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Eye's Removed

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Eye's Removed

Walking till my eye's removed.
I'm disgusted by most people in 
this world.
All this hate suppressed for 
what?
Anything that happens in this 
world,
Seems to be my fault.
For what?
All the hate I have for this 
world.

Everyone pisses me off.
I want to get out of here.
All the stupid shit.
Let's make this clear.
I hate this stupid shit.
I want to get out of here.
Let me make this clear.
Get me the fuck out of here.

Sometimes isolated and alone.
I find comfort in my own head.
I've done this on my own.
I'm comfortable being dead.

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  1. Date: 7/27/2013 3:57:00 PM
    You are very angry man..all your poems have the same feel. Having said that..you should continue to write. If you want your poems read, please don't post so many at one time. It pushes other poets off without getting their stuff read. I intend no disrespect..just a heads up..BG

    Davis Avatar Michael Davis
    Date: 7/27/2013 4:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No all of my poems don't have the 'same feel'. I highly doubt you read all of my poetry. Petals and Hymn or Wonder To Your Core are very positive, thought provoking poems. But thanks for your feedback.
    Davis Avatar Michael Davis
    Date: 7/27/2013 4:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    This poem is about not fitting in with the crowd and just wanting to leave. I am not angry. My poetry is not angry either. My poetry is real. I will continue to write, thank you. I write about the darker things in life. Sometimes I write about controversial topics. If you don't like it, don't read it.