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First impression - impress me contest

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First impression - impress me contest

Oh Giorgio how can i imress you
What words can i say
Shall I write about a blue sky
On a summers day.

Maybe a mighty boat
That sailed away to heavens gates
Taking with it our loved ones
To a painfree  home, to watch and wait

Think i will write about the heartache
Brought on by those in power
Sending our lads to fight
A battle no one wants to endure

How about I write of love
You seek and you will find
Where you want to hold and touch
Lustily seductive, mind twisting kind

Hope i have impressed  you
With these few words of mine
Even more so I think
Cos i penned it all in rhyme



Penned 27 July 2013


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  1. Date: 8/5/2013 6:02:00 AM
    SR., congrats on your well deserved victory. G.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/5/2013 5:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Giorgio, glad you liked it ....Seren
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 10:06:00 PM
    You certainly impressed me, wonderfully written ....Peter

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/28/2013 2:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol Peter am so glad i impressed someone...Seren
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:56:00 PM
    I delight in your sweet words, seren.. distintly flavored to enthrall!..:) huggs

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/27/2013 7:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Nette, glad you liked it........Seren
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 6:10:00 AM
    If you don't place high I would be greatly disappointed Seren! I really enjoyed reading this amazing and superior poem this morning! What a lovely piece, such a glorious poem, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/27/2013 7:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Russell, we shall ser, i enjoyed writing it , thats all that matters ...Seren
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:48:00 AM
    This one should do well in the contest. Beautifully written, you connect different ideas and make them flow as one.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/27/2013 7:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oops should read Helllo
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/27/2013 7:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Helli and thanks Monterey.....Seren