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  1. Date: 4/24/2014 7:27:00 AM
    Giorgio!!! This is like an art-- uninhibited,, very raw in form... Goodness! Parts of it, I just don't understand or may be I do, not very sure... But, it is a like a great composition by the master himself!,,, gautami

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 4:47:00 PM
    Just beautiful Giorgio!!!

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 9:58:00 AM
    Giorgio wow fantastic a worthy winner Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 7:00:00 AM
    It doesn't get better than this. Spectacular!

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 9:46:00 PM
    sweet congrats to you G... wow..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 3:27:00 PM
    - Congratulations on a wonderful first place! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 3:12:00 PM
    an outstanding piece ....congrats on your win

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 2:29:00 PM
    Congratulations on a brilliant win...Peter

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 9:37:00 AM
    Your way with words just blow me away! Unmatched by those of us who only wish we could write a poem such as this. One among many by you........again, I offer my congratulations, well deserved you are!!

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 9:15:00 AM
    Giorgio, a beautiful poem in every way. Congratulations! thank you for making my day a nice one... When you have time enjoy my beautiful blog * Called "Title That Reminds Me Of You" always & forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 9:10:00 AM
    Hi Giorgio! I can only hope to be able to write in iambic pentameter -- It sure was so nice to read this aloud and I even encountered new words-- your title intrigued me and you painted such an interesting tale here, I am also enjoying the imagery you used here. Also, thank you for passing by my poem...Sorry, I don't live in New York, never been there even but it sure would be an awesome place to visit someday!

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 12:00:00 AM
    Just reading this one again. This is really great iambic pentameter and some of the words you used are so rare to see rhymed. wow. Hey , thanks for the nice win in your contest. I am glad you liked my poem!!

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 7:37:00 AM
    YOu chose an excellent venue for your poem, by entering in PD's "Beauty" contest.

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 12:45:00 AM
    my, a beauty full of emotional range and rhythmic assonance passionately swerving along each line.. a tremendous piece, G... :) huggs